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Acoustiks Acoustiks is a male
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Please check out my new track 'The World We're Living In (wip)' and post your comments here!

I think I might change the name, but not so sure.

The song does reflect how I feel. Do you recognize the artist I sampled from?

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24-12-2008 08:09
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Sweet violins good tune as usual.
Intro is a bit repetitive to my taste, needs more elements, and the whole tune (except the sub) sounds a bit hi-passed to me, it seems to be lacking low mids. Not too wild about the fake drop which rest for 2 bars, the built-up tension (which isn't too much after all) doesn't last that long. When the first sub hit appears the kick drum is taken out.
Has potential.

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24-12-2008 11:16 Homepage of BattleDrone
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hi there Big Grin got ur style plastered all over this one Bigup loveley melodies as always from you.

i like the vocals too Big Grin everything could be more promenent tho mix could be clearer and more defined imo

mainly the beats could punch thru a little better, also some additional elements maybe to maintain slight more interest

overall great stuff here!!

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24-12-2008 13:40 Homepage of Ketz
Acoustiks Acoustiks is a male
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Yeah, a lot of it was kinda thrown together. It was around 3am so I had to keep it down. Which means cut the lows or my Mom will kill me. Plus my friend was sleeping right behind me. Crying

I think for this one I'm not going to have a drop for once. I think this tune doesn't need one.
24-12-2008 19:45
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cool track nice vocal/choir sample, cant hear what theyre singing tho! Love the bit with the strings round a minute. Sounds like a really good idea for a track alot of nice melodies an drums, mix an that needs thinkin tho, but would like to hear the finished article

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24-12-2008 21:41 Homepage of Timmi
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Wow, with a bit of work from a mastering engineer this could go in the charts! This is super commerical and super cool too. Deffo should be on the radio. Timmi is spot on about the vocals tho - I can't hear what they're saying either. This is a problem because it means we can't sing along to them!

Can't really add anything that hasn't already been said. I really think this is wicked. Btw, I like the tune title.

Please, please post the full version here when it's done. Big Grin

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25-12-2008 19:18 Homepage of Tomos
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wow this is quite cool. very different .... musically sweet Big Grin love the little build you got and love it when it drops in. Just don't like that lil kick clap you got buildin up to the drop....but other than that. GOOD WORK!

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25-12-2008 20:53
Acoustiks Acoustiks is a male
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Wow, with a bit of work from a mastering engineer this could go in the charts! This is super commerical and super cool too. Deffo should be on the radio. Timmi is spot on about the vocals tho - I can't hear what they're saying either. This is a problem because it means we can't sing along to them!

Can't really add anything that hasn't already been said. I really think this is wicked. Btw, I like the tune title.

Please, please post the full version here when it's done. Big Grin

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Aww, I wasn't going for commercial, darn. Unless you mean commercial in quality? I'm not so sure about the charts, I'll see ho wit goes down on bassdrive. My trakcs are going off pretty good over there. Big Grin

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Unfortunately, I can't do anything about the vocals. In the sample there was already some strings in there. Crying After a few listens you'll have those vocals down. I completed the track, but I cannot upload it. Huh

It's around 7 minutes now too. Drummer

N-Vee, that whole deal has been removed. So has that piss poor buildup. Pleased

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I hope you guys will like the finished product. Devil
27-12-2008 06:15
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