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Philthy McNasty Philthy McNasty is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Disco Jump Up' and post your comments here!

A tune that is definitely not my usual, but I am pretty happy what I came up with. Still working on a proper intro and buildup to the first drop. Has a disco, jazzy, JumpUp feel to it. Let me know what you guys think, and if your feeling it. Thanks! RespeKt as always

Philthy aka Cheez


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23-12-2008 23:35 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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ez mate, haha i like the theme Big Grin definately feein it when it drops! Drummer some proper dancefloor shizzle Big Grin

structure could flow more but ur workin on that so Big Grin i think some rise pad would work a treat for the build ups

the beat sounds a bit muffled, could be more clear and also try getting some more hi end in there

good stuff so far - i like this one a lot Big Grin

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23-12-2008 23:44 Homepage of Ketz
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Yeah Ketz, I'm working on getting the break brighter without over powering the hihats, which is kinda hard. But will tweak it the best I can once I get the first buildup worked out. Thanks for the quick feedback Drummer Drummer

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24-12-2008 00:42 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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ent feeling it
sorry to be harsh
24-12-2008 06:08
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ent feeling it
sorry to be harsh


LOL its always the new guy with the zero rating who knows nothing about the rating system....go figure.................

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24-12-2008 07:54 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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Originally posted by DialogueDJ
ent feeling it
sorry to be harsh


"Here let me rate it all zero's cause I know nothing about production or the rating system, and I can't even spell ain't"


See its fools like this why I am going to probably stop posting on this site. I get honest feedback and honest ratings for the regulars, and there is always 1 new person that signs up that knows absolute shit and they ruin a rating....I call to Chronic, Tomos, or on of the other admins to wein out the people who know absolutely nothing about what this site is about

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24-12-2008 08:00 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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If you could add a few extra disco-elements and get the percussion to sound a bit more real (the tom/tabla/bongo things), this would be KILLER! Surely stuff that can set dancefloors on fire!
Really like the idea that you try something totally different! Superb shit man.
Try to make basslines and melodies that go over 2 bars, this will add more groove to the tune and keep it interesting in the long run.
For the tom/tabla/bongo things, check out some breaks that have good bongo's and use them as it gives them a more natural flow.

And don't get bothered so much by 1 voter. It's only a preview dude.
Work the tune and your scores will rise, no doubt.

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24-12-2008 11:10 Homepage of BattleDrone
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quote:
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Originally posted by DialogueDJ
ent feeling it
sorry to be harsh


"Here let me rate it all zero's cause I know nothing about production or the rating system, and I can't even spell ain't"


See its fools like this why I am going to probably stop posting on this site. I get honest feedback and honest ratings for the regulars, and there is always 1 new person that signs up that knows absolute shit and they ruin a rating....I call to Chronic, Tomos, or on of the other admins to wein out the people who know absolutely nothing about what this site is about


don't worry too much about it mate, it happened to me too Mad i'm sure with more "represetative" votes it will ignore the 1s and ur average should improve

the vibe u captured is heavy man! Rinse

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LOL Yeah I was just drunk when I read that shit, and had a man period for a sec. Whatever tho. I still get irritated by the 1 person that votes tunes down, it seems to happen to everyone and its get fucking annoying. Fuck it tho Drummer Drummer

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24-12-2008 19:17 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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If you have 10+ votes that one doesn't make a big difference anymore.

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24-12-2008 19:21 Homepage of BattleDrone
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cool track u got here, i reckon u should really drag out the build up, it didnt really hav any impact, but all the other ingredients for a good tune are there, bring out some of those disco melodies in the main part of the tune 2.

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yer it needs a melody in there some where but its a really nice clean production mate
try lifting something from an old disk
fuck The votes concentrate on improving by listening to what peps are telling you.

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In terms of ideas and melodies, this is super. Big Grin Really, really funky. Deffo one to dance to. Love the disco elements, they work nicely.

I'd have to disagree with Lighting though when he said this is a clean production because it sounds quite messy to me tbh. The kicks and subs are clipping quite heavily, there are too many loud elements competing for space and clashing, the low frequencies are very crowded, and the whole thing sounds a bit squashed. You need to let the sounds breathe more and tone down the volume and bass frequencies.

Like I said tho, this is super. With some quality work on the EQ side of things, this could even better. Big Grin Keep it going, you're onto some good here.

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25-12-2008 19:33 Homepage of Tomos
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This is so different but I like it! Just that lil tune thing at the beginning after the drop a bit loud...maybe add a bit something different in there to ?? And yea it does seem a bit heavy but cool little atmospheres goin on. love the intro...there will always be one or two that are negative so really you don't needa worry everyone gets there negative feedback even the pros. just keep doin what you do its goooooood.

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25-12-2008 20:48
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