Please check out my new track 'Disco Jump Up' and post your comments here!
A tune that is definitely not my usual, but I am pretty happy what I came up with. Still working on a proper intro and buildup to the first drop. Has a disco, jazzy, JumpUp feel to it. Let me know what you guys think, and if your feeling it. Thanks! RespeKt as always
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Yeah Ketz, I'm working on getting the break brighter without over powering the hihats, which is kinda hard. But will tweak it the best I can once I get the first buildup worked out. Thanks for the quick feedback
Originally posted by DialogueDJ
ent feeling it
sorry to be harsh
"Here let me rate it all zero's cause I know nothing about production or the rating system, and I can't even spell ain't"
See its fools like this why I am going to probably stop posting on this site. I get honest feedback and honest ratings for the regulars, and there is always 1 new person that signs up that knows absolute shit and they ruin a rating....I call to Chronic, Tomos, or on of the other admins to wein out the people who know absolutely nothing about what this site is about
If you could add a few extra disco-elements and get the percussion to sound a bit more real (the tom/tabla/bongo things), this would be KILLER! Surely stuff that can set dancefloors on fire!
Really like the idea that you try something totally different! Superb shit man.
Try to make basslines and melodies that go over 2 bars, this will add more groove to the tune and keep it interesting in the long run.
For the tom/tabla/bongo things, check out some breaks that have good bongo's and use them as it gives them a more natural flow.
And don't get bothered so much by 1 voter. It's only a preview dude.
Work the tune and your scores will rise, no doubt.
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Originally posted by DialogueDJ
ent feeling it
sorry to be harsh
"Here let me rate it all zero's cause I know nothing about production or the rating system, and I can't even spell ain't"
See its fools like this why I am going to probably stop posting on this site. I get honest feedback and honest ratings for the regulars, and there is always 1 new person that signs up that knows absolute shit and they ruin a rating....I call to Chronic, Tomos, or on of the other admins to wein out the people who know absolutely nothing about what this site is about
don't worry too much about it mate, it happened to me too
i'm sure with more "represetative" votes it will ignore the 1s and ur average should improve
LOL Yeah I was just drunk when I read that shit, and had a man period for a sec. Whatever tho. I still get irritated by the 1 person that votes tunes down, it seems to happen to everyone and its get fucking annoying. Fuck it tho
cool track u got here, i reckon u should really drag out the build up, it didnt really hav any impact, but all the other ingredients for a good tune are there, bring out some of those disco melodies in the main part of the tune 2.
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yer it needs a melody in there some where but its a really nice clean production mate
try lifting something from an old disk
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Lightningflash: 24-12-2008 22:50.
In terms of ideas and melodies, this is super.
Really, really funky. Deffo one to dance to. Love the disco elements, they work nicely.
I'd have to disagree with Lighting though when he said this is a clean production because it sounds quite messy to me tbh. The kicks and subs are clipping quite heavily, there are too many loud elements competing for space and clashing, the low frequencies are very crowded, and the whole thing sounds a bit squashed. You need to let the sounds breathe more and tone down the volume and bass frequencies.
Like I said tho, this is super. With some quality work on the EQ side of things, this could even better.
Keep it going, you're onto some good here.
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This is so different but I like it! Just that lil tune thing at the beginning after the drop a bit loud...maybe add a bit something different in there to ?? And yea it does seem a bit heavy but cool little atmospheres goin on. love the intro...there will always be one or two that are negative so really you don't needa worry everyone gets there negative feedback even the pros. just keep doin what you do its goooooood.