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Ez everyone,aint bin on ere in awile-bin workin on this for cupple weeks on n off-nearly finished.i purposely went for not alot atmosphere but fair nuff if u think sounds too 'empty'.my speakers are pretty shit n can only slightly hear real lo bass but is pumpin at 60hz on me analyzer so can ne1 wiv descent system let me kno if sub sounds alrite?safe for reviews n advice!
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Drums should be changed, first of all, the kick and snare have no punch and they sound a bit death, especially the snare. Structure is a bit chaotic, at least I don't hear the story at times. The basses and synths sound a bit muffled as well.
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interesting track. quite an original idea. the mid bassline might sound better if it was pitched up an octave.i like the beat pattern. it could sound better if layered more. a little repetertive. 2.5/5
hey bro you certainly usin the right sounds its just the way that you use them thats not really happening very well........Like if you change it up with bass line with a cuttoff your something instead of droning on throughout the song.....the song just sought of builds only very slightly and the peak of the song just seems to fit on a flat line......bit like a heart monitor when you have a heart attack....beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep ....gotta get that heart goin...Really put something into those sounds you have. be creative
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19-12-2008 06:14
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Cheers 4 the comments-made all the basses on zeta-i did actually do alot of automation on cutoff n reso 4 the bassline but defintly see wot everyones saying bout not really gettin goin n bein a bit muffled an flat.
ez mate, i can hear the sub but it needs to hum more i reckon, doesn't sound low and powerful enough for me
dark vibes here, i don't think the kick n snare are bad but they need to cut thru the mix a bit better, the whole thing needs more impact to acheive the darkness ur going for
whole thing sounds a tad messy but i defo like the ideas, get some omre power in there and make the structure a bit more logical and u got nice tune on ur hands
Yeah I agree that the bass needs to be picked up a little.. bit dead at the mo. I don't know if it's just me but there are some hats in there that sound like a clanging mix.. off time by just a little and are really offputting.
