Please check out my new track 'Dat Fire' and post your comments here!
A remix of an older tune on I did that is on here [URL]http://www.drumnbass.be/forum/thread.php?&threadid=9816[URL] Peep the older tune and get a kick out of how much I have improved, cause I sure did. Check it and let me know what u tink good or bad. RespeKt
Cool man sounds pretty cool....recognise that bassline but you've used it quite well interestin bringin the bass in using the volume... I woulda held it off for a bit...had some cool little bongo tinny type drum roll down then Smashed it..just opinion. Like when you break it down but think its a bit bass heavy and the breaks are fighting for space..... Like how you change it up at the end. many great ideas. At some points I just feel theres too much going on like eg. when your bringin to records together when just slightly outta time it sounds cluttered. I like it though big respekt back brother awesome ideas.
Interesting tune with some fat sounds. However, I'd concur with pretty much everything N-Vee said. It does sound quite cluttered during the main parts and the bassline drops too soon. The intro would benefit from more tension. The structure is a little weird at times too. It could be much simpler and cleaner with defined drops and breakdowns.
Like I said tho, there's lot of interestings, clear sounds. The sub is really sweet and the clarity in the mids is equally good. Big ups for that.
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ez mate, lovin all ur beats actually, always rooooollllin
1st drop - gets a bit messy with the synth and bass as the melodies are not gellin that well rhythmically, but when its just the sub and mid bass goin with the beats - that part rocks!
(so maybe even take some of the synth stuff out and just leave all the big bass ideas in there?)
yeah could be built up better..
fuckin huge sub! and killer edits too on that 2:20 onwards section
really feelin this one for sure man get rid of that synth!
Wicked beats first of all.. I love the way they're rolling. the bassline is a little hard to hear.. it could be boosted a bit more I reckon. Liking the little changes and variations here n there, makes it stand out as a well worked tune. Bass thing that comes in tho, super wrong lol. maybe find a melody that works better..?
I like the drums but the with the rest of the track i couldnt really pick out a melody an it sounds a bit messy, maybe rethink the structure of how many of the different sounds u got ontop of each other at one time, an it might work better, Or perhaps u could eq things a bit differently so u can pick out each sound more clearly. Love the breakdown at around 1:50, wicked stuff uve done with the drums there, would be nice to hear some of that kinda stuff in the intro too. overall sounds like uve got good production skills, jus a bit too much goin on at once at times. big ups
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Timmi: 28-12-2008 16:41.
(so maybe even take some of the synth stuff out and just leave all the big bass ideas in there?)
