Buildup works really well, that organ is really good.
After the drop the vocals seem a tad off tone and they are too loud. They also sound a bit smurf-like-pitched which does no good to the tune imo, the echoes are also too loud. Maybe a lot can be improved by cutting the low end of the vocal a bit more? (like the whispering in the intro).
Instruments are well picked, tune rolls like hell.
Some sub bass here and there could give the tune that bit extra that would make crowds go insane on the dancefloor.
A melodic part in the middle would be the icing on the cake.
Very very promising preview!
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wicked vibe from the get go, lovin that mate
intro all flows well, very niceley done indeed, all makes perfect sense
when the vocal comes in, its got that old skool shizzle all over it, i don't mind the high pitchness of it (it is old skool vs nu skool after all
) but doesn't seem to sit that well with some of the synth melodies, maybe try some different melodies see if they work better
drums could have more impact and roll a bit more, not sure about the kick sample
overall wicked stuff - let us all hear the next version!
not a bad track although i did think it was a bit light on bass and the vocal sounded good and then at one point became 2 much in a cheesy happy hard core sort of way.If it was my track i would delete the vocal where the tune drops i found it cheesy at that point [53 seconds in] the whole 'my baby says 2 me' bit belongs in a hixxy and vibes tune it doesn't sound as bad when u used it in the break and separated the sentences out but i think theirs a better vocal out their 4 this track.I liked the rhodes riff and the beats but i thought bassline could have been better i was waiting 4 a big humming sub on the drop but got a little half cocked pluck from a bass guitar, even with the bass at +10 on my amp it still sounded weak
intro sounds wicked a bit commercial but dont think thats a problem nowdays.
yeah organ sounds good the vocals come in good and fade out good..........out of tune when she starts singing though. could do with a nice simple sub in there aswell, sounds a bit empty without it. hope to hear this one finished mate.
Wow love it this is different....duuno bout those vocals ...its just personally though. I like the track itself....the vocals before it dropped were cool though. Sounds nice on the monitors .. Good job, nice vibe
The high pitched vocals definitely give it an old skool feel. It's in danger of sounding a bit like happy hardcore tho, like neumonics said, so be careful because happy hardcore is a big pile of steaming shite. Also, they don't quite gel with the other melodies.
Vocals side, melodies are excellent, got me hooked from the very start. Reminds me of a driving game I used to play all the time on a Sega Megadrive, which is no bad thing. Can't remember what it's called now tho.
Overall, a sweet tune. I'd probably cut the vocals, but that's just personal pref.
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Nice everything except the vocals after the drop don't seem to fit with the key of the rest of the tune. I do like the pitched up oldskool-ness of the tho.. I'd be tempted to get them into melodyne or an auto tune just to make sure they fit with the rest of the track. Love the laid back organ riff.
wicked vibe from the get go, lovin that mate 
intro all flows well, very niceley done indeed, all makes perfect sense
) but doesn't seem to sit that well with some of the synth melodies, maybe try some different melodies see if they work better
