Love the style! Too much reverb on snare.
Sounds a little (too) empty at times.
Could do with a clear theme throughout the track (some pad melody, some synth stab that comes back in every now and then,... choose).
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although im new to the making of DnB i feel that this is rather a poor effort.
it gets quite boring to be honest and well it doesnt hold my attention at all. like battle drone says it has to much reverb on the snare and the whole track feels to enclsed it has no room sounds clash and and dont have their own levels.
but you know what keep trying my man and you will find out how to get going in no time at all
ez Zack, cool steppy intro haha wicked bad buoy techy neuro bizness guanin
some of the bass work is proper wicked, lfo whomp whomp yeah! after 1:00 seems to flow well, i find the intro a bit too confusing
lol (i know u going for the hectic / chaotic thing but i reckon would sound better if it was done more naturally)
some more elements, pads / fx and fill out some of the other elements if that ain't enough
Hi-pass the break you’re a re fading on top of your drum loop because the kick gets loud and messy in the low end without.
I think it’s the low end you that makes some element’s frequencies slightly clash. So re-eq stuff in the low freqs and try only to give those things a strong bottom end that really need to have one. Just a guess…
Can’t really add something more, I pretty much agree to what ketz and battle drone said.
I do not agree that this is a poor effort. Mr. Shizzle-nister has obviously not heard poor efforts when it comes to dnb production.
Like this man. Got some cool sounds bro!!! Yea and love it changing up. The musics talking ...man I needa do more of this ... It sounds good on my monitors ... Awesome stuff ...love all the drums you've used sounds great. enjoyed it
great start....main kick and snare are nice and big, some cool little drum edits too, drums could defo use beefin up tho, sound a little empty....some of the fx sound a little random imo, bass is quite nice, needs a heavuer sub tho.....the arrangement is good, nice build ups and drop downs....doesn't seem to have a clear strucuture and the mix in general is a bit muffled....not a bad tune overall tho....got potential.
I can hear a lot of influence from Calyx and Teebee here, especially on the bassline. Overall, sounds great to me. Very punchy. Although I think you need to tone down the compression on the beats because it's thinning them out a bit. They seem to have lost some of their power and they should be sounding phatter than this.
That aside, this is a great effort. Lots of great things here - cool basslines, nice sub, techy beat patterns, some brilliant beat edits and FX.
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haha yeah man there's so many poorer efforts than this. I like it a lot. You got the processes down, technically it's a pretty good tune. I think there could be more creative inspiration in it. It sounds very empty at times and whilst the structure is pretty good at holding interest, it does lack a little summ-summat that could make this a great tune... a pad maybe?
some of the bass work is proper wicked, lfo whomp whomp yeah! after 1:00 seems to flow well, i find the intro a bit too confusing 
lol (i know u going for the hectic / chaotic thing but i reckon would sound better if it was done more naturally)
