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Pytchlocka Pytchlocka is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Kerosene' and post your comments here!

Very unfinished, just wanted some early feedback. KrYpToLoCkA.
07-12-2008 00:17 Homepage of Pytchlocka
Timmi Timmi is a male
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drums are quite cool soundin, need some more movement in the bass tho, its a bit borin, its ok havin the same note for a few bars but u need to be switchin up the sounds or rhythm or something to make it a bit more interesting. one to work on tho. nice1 Smile

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07-12-2008 03:42 Homepage of Timmi
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Deffo agree with Timmi about the bass needing more movement. Gets quite tiresome pretty quickly. Obviously it's still early days with this one. Beats sound good, well EQed. A bit more distortion would be good in this I feel. It sounds a little bit thin atm. Distortion would help beef up the sound.

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07-12-2008 11:07 Homepage of Tomos
Uberchile Uberchile is a male
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not too keen on the snare in the second phrase with the lower bass.

rings a bit too much imo.

apart from that everything else is v.good

liking the 16th hats that come in , rollin .

could be a phat track with more variation, fx , mabye some twistyness in the bassline.

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07-12-2008 19:18 Homepage of Uberchile
Ketz Ketz is a male
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hey Seb hows it goin? damn thats loud! Big Grin big military style drum action going on Drummer agree with Tomos and Timmi could be layered a bit more to give the whole thing a bit more body

feelin the ideas, likin the sub action, idea is there, just needs some work on automations, more movement, more shuffles as well i reckon on the drums

likin where this is going mate Bigup

ps from 2:23 onwards is much better, try maintain that earlier in the tack Wink


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12-12-2008 19:36 Homepage of Ketz
c_ctrl c_ctrl is a male
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Not so sure about this tune, the bassline is pretty meh.. it needs some variations to make this tune exciting. Some of the beats are good, need a little EQ and to make them pop out but they roll nice. Mate i'd say just work on the bassline, maybe with some variation it will bring some energy in.

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17-12-2008 05:13 Homepage of c_ctrl
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