DJCP1 - Cp Dub #5 (fan D Fire)

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DJCP1 - Cp Dub #5 (fan D Fire)

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DJCP1

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Registration Date: 12-11-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Cp Dub #5 (fan D Fire)' and post your comments here!

***STRICTLY FOR HARDCORE JUNGLIST*** I have received many flattering reviews of this track.I have sent it off to Record CO.'s...without a response so (Thus far).. I post it here in an attempt for suggestions. Please be honest.I have more tracks & will get to reviews of others when I'm in the proper mind set to be completely objective & unbiased. (After all that is the point of this site).
ONE LOVE!!!
Jungle, Ragga Dub style, with lyrics provided by Mr.Doll ,Rough beatz, Deep rollin' ragga Bass lines, keys, horns, ect... All feedback is appreciated. ENJOY!!!

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03-12-2008 05:27

brucifer brucifer is a male

Making all the tunes your mum loves

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Fuck man. You do your mixes far to loud. It is clipping real bad mate.

Ok, the drums I like. Remind me of some of the early Kemet kru stuff.

The bass is far to loud. Stay out of the red mate. Sounds hollo as well. Reverb???

I think you need to spend a bit more time on your drum edits. They get a bit messy and don't always flow properly. They also need some eq'ing doing to them.

Part of making a song sound loud is eq'ing stuff you don't need, out. This gives more space for the rest of the sounds to breath.

Also, If you want reviews, give them back as well, I see you have given a few. Your excuses just sound lazy, no offense mate. But we all have problems, be it bad back, kids and all the usual stuff life throws at us.

not bad track. Needs quite a bit of work really, structure and sound wise.

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by brucifer: 03-12-2008 06:21.

03-12-2008 06:14

the moneyshot the moneyshot is a male

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Registration Date: 31-12-2007
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your ideas are good, some pure junglistic shit!!
but you mix down needs attention. check some of the forums on here for eq'ing advice. i think you need to mix up your fx and vocal shots abit as they get abit repetative. make sure you use clean samples aswell this will help with the eq probs you are having.

cheers man.

btw my excuse for not giving feed back over the last 5-6 weeks is my pc blew up. i cant review what i cant hear!!!

ill try and go back and review as many as i can.

03-12-2008 07:31

Tomos

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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Originally posted by brucifer
Fuck man. You do your mixes far to loud. It is clipping real bad mate.

Ok, the drums I like. Remind me of some of the early Kemet kru stuff.

The bass is far to loud. Stay out of the red mate. Sounds hollo as well. Reverb???

I think you need to spend a bit more time on your drum edits. They get a bit messy and don't always flow properly. They also need some eq'ing doing to them.

Part of making a song sound loud is eq'ing stuff you don't need, out. This gives more space for the rest of the sounds to breath.

Also, If you want reviews, give them back as well, I see you have given a few. Your excuses just sound lazy, no offense mate. But we all have problems, be it bad back, kids and all the usual stuff life throws at us.

not bad track. Needs quite a bit of work really, structure and sound wise.

Agree 100% with every word of this. You said everything I wanted to say about this tune.

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03-12-2008 21:58

DJCP1

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FUCK YOU!!! Just because my drums aren't a constant boring beat you say they're messy. Why don't work on house music then Asshole. You & the whole Fucking site can kiss my ass!!!! Devil

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03-12-2008 22:14

Tomos

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Mate, calm down. Don't expect anybody on this website to kiss your arse and say how wonderful your tracks are. This is a website for people who want honest and fair feeback and expect some back in return. People like Brucifer have kindly and fairly highlighted several areas where your tune could be improved. Don't get offended by this, it's actually done with the intention of helping you.

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03-12-2008 22:30

BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male

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Originally posted by DJCP1
...I post it here in an attempt for suggestions. Please be honest...

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Originally posted by brucifer
I think you need to spend a bit more time on your drum edits. They get a bit messy and don't always flow properly.

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Originally posted by DJCP1
CENSORED Just because my drums aren't a constant boring beat you say they're messy. Why don't work on house music then CENSORED. You & the whole CENSORED site can CENSORED

1. Don't ask for reviews if you can't take it
2. READ what people WRITE
3. Change your attitude or don't waste people's time.

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03-12-2008 22:53

brucifer brucifer is a male

Making all the tunes your mum loves

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Originally posted by DJCP1
FUCK YOU!!! Just because my drums aren't a constant boring beat you say they're messy. Why don't work on house music then Asshole. You & the whole Fucking site can kiss my ass!!!! Devil

WOW!!! sorry mate. My mistake. Your song is absolutely amazing. After listening to your track, I reckon your breaks are on par with Paradox, definately better than anything Remarc created. That bass, Reminds me of Zinc or Hype. Your tune is definately better than any raggajungle by Brain Killers, M Beat, Potential Bad Boy, Kemet . Certainly puts anything on Ibiza or its sister labels to shame. I reckon your melodies piss over anything by Nookie or Skanna. Did you actually get your vocals from Kingston? I'm well impressed. Why don't you contact Bizzy B, I'm sure he would release it. Did you send your demo to Danny? I'm sure he would restart Suburban Base for you... That is me being an asshole. I could go on, but I can think of better things to do...

But seriously mate, Sorry if I hurt your feeling, but if you can't take a little bit of criticism, you will never create anything good. It's the only way to learn... I hope this doesn't put you off and I hope you put something else up soon. This review wasnt meant as a knock at you, it was just personal opinion.

Peace Happy