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Philthy McNasty 
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled' and post your comments here!
Still messing with this tune...grrr....Need a fresh set of ears to tell me what to do to it, cause I have listened to it, and tweaked it so much, I may have to leave it for a few weeks and come back to it. Let me know what u tink~!
RespeKt!
Philthy
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03-12-2008 01:04 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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03-12-2008 06:19 |
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the moneyshot
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hi mate. intro is a little repetative, and the drums dont really stand out, theres no snap in the snare. main part sounds better........ i like the bass melody. again tho it gets a bit repetative.
if your getting board of working on the track maybe try approach it like your remixing it and totally smash it up. thats what i do sometimes.
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03-12-2008 07:39 |
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Tomos
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Still liking this one mate, especially the guitar riff. Sounds really good to me. One thing I don't like about this is the Joe Pesci sample. It sounds out of place to me. Also, the beats sounds quite thin, especially the snare. They are overpowered by that huge bass sound, which is a little too loud and prominent I reckon. Still a good tune tho.
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06-12-2008 12:45 |
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c_ctrl
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If the beats were a bit bigger and stronger I'd really like them more than I do now. I like the superfast shuffling going on, but the snare is too static, there's no snap to it. Wicked bassline aswell, little overpowering but when you got a sick b line like that it's easy to crank it up a little too far lol. I'd say deffo come back to it in a few weeks or summat cos it's got potential.
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07-12-2008 18:54 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Snare could use a tad more.
Melodies sound a bit uninspired to me.
Choice of instruments could be a bit better.
I prefer the sound without the high lead (2:07 - 2:4
. at 2:48 you create an anti-climax by just letting the high melody come back and not do anything with the silence.
Mixdown sounds a bit muddy.
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08-12-2008 16:36 |
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Krisch
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I like the bass melody. The drums are too back in the mix and has too wide stereo field imo. The drum programming is quite good i like it. At 3:08 i dont know what sample is that but i'd remove that 
Some variation in the bass would be good. The mixdown is muddy as BD said but i liked this one, want to hear the finished version.
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08-12-2008 19:11 |
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