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Sephiroth Sephiroth is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled' and post your comments here!

Untitled and unfinished.....lemme know what ya think....

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30-11-2008 13:51 Homepage of Sephiroth
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very nice mate , but i gotta go , i will review later , i cant here anything wrong with it at the mo thou Smile !!!!!
30-11-2008 14:04
Gregg Gregg is a male
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Intro is really nice, choir sounds good and those toms add some grove and depth to the tune. Maybe they could be slightly more upfront?

First I wanted to advice you to add some higher notes to the choir, then I realized that you actually did so but just allusively. So make that also a tad louder and use it as variation in the intro.

Not sure about the type of phaser you’ve got there on your drums when they fade in. I think phasers tend to make things sound sort of cheap… well personal preference ?!?

Main part fucking rocks man! Recce is dope !!! Sub bass kicks ass, in parts maybe a bit overbearing… Kick needs some boosting though I reckon. I'd add punch by using some compression.

You could replace your crash with a orch hit or so to make it sound more unique.

Overall quality work! That’s the sort of dnb style I like!

Keep it up!
30-11-2008 14:08 Homepage of Gregg
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Great atmospheric intro, really pro sounding. The stuttery synth is freaky as hell especially layered up with that bassline. The beats are crisp and heavy aswell, with a great high end aswell.. great production all round.

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30-11-2008 16:15 Homepage of c_ctrl
BESHAI BESHAI is a male
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like the creepy intro. very epic and metal!
like when the drums come in. love all the sounds u got going on. that dirty neuro sound is awesome over the gate or arp! think the drums could be louder in the mix. cause in my headphones the arp or gate is a bit louder than everything else in the mix. always dig ur shite bro.

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30-11-2008 17:15 Homepage of BESHAI
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Liking the vocally pad
liking the bit crushed stuff. Perhaps too much panning on that though?
I think the timpani beat could be louder, make it nice and pounding imo
beats coming.......yeah not bad. think it could be a tad more upfront in the mix

Loving those ripping reeces as per usual Big Grin
The gated pad is a tiny tiny bit too loud imo and i think it could benefit from some a nice wide verb
Not much of a drop but it works pretty well actually.
like the toms roll before the pad stops gating.
I think that pad gets over used a touch, perhaps on the bit where you stop gating it you could drop it an octave for a bit more variation then bring it up that octave for the breakdown?

Anyway more good stuff from you chap

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30-11-2008 18:50 Homepage of D2o
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Brilliant, creepy intro! Love that vibe. The tearing reeses are brilliant too. How did you create them? Wasn't too wild about the gated synths tho. They are a little too repetitive and predictable for me. A bit of variation and some suprises would be good.

Still a good tune overall tho. Keep it going bro.

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30-11-2008 20:04 Homepage of Tomos
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ez Seph Happy great intro, u seem to be really good at those Bigup choir works well for me, quite epic feel to it all (maybe some more big bangs and crashes just for pure effect?)

beats nice, rollin, punchy kick, wicked filtered reece action - ur trademark Big Grin sub is warm, maybe a bit too much panning on the synth?

cool edits on the beat Drummer like some of those rolls u got going on too

all flows well, couldn't help thinkin maybe some more big changeups with the reece but thats nit picking

great work mate! Big Grin


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30-11-2008 22:34 Homepage of Ketz
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Very promising! Tearing basses are all good. Lovely!
Sounds like it's a 4minutes plus intro though. You should get some more action into it.

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01-12-2008 00:20 Homepage of BattleDrone
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this is a wicked track and it might be a mistake but it sounds really similar to endgame by noisia. It's a not a bad track with that aside tho

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01-12-2008 02:09 Homepage of Timmi
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yeah, you're definately king of the atmospheric intro atm man good stuff

Drop could be heavier, great bass work again though. I think you could have dropped straight into the heavier drums that come in at 2:15 ish for more impact.

Not much more to say, enjoyed a lot, finish it

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01-12-2008 18:01 Homepage of Binary Havoc
Sephiroth Sephiroth is a male
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thanks for the reviews peps.....will make the timpani hits louder, gated choir is pretty loud too, need to tone that down, tryin to get the track length down aswell....nearly 8 mins for finished version.....@ timmi, it does sound a bit like endgame and maybe believe now i think about it, wasn't intentional, guess years of noisia abuse through the headphones have filtered into my sub-conscious....

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01-12-2008 23:27 Homepage of Sephiroth
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ez mate , yeah like this , the rating r a bit 4 some reason , its not that bad that i can tell , but hey my ears r a bit fucked nowwa days Frown , the track can benefit from a lot more as its only a preview im sure ur going to add to it , like it alot nice !!!!!
02-12-2008 13:35
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