Please check out my new track 'Computer Funk' and post your comments here!
Hey guys! It's been forever since I've been around here, mostly because I've been producing electro.
The other day I was inspired to work on some drum and bass and this is where the track is at right now. Definitely an electro-step style track. I did the vocals myself (the lyrics just popped into my head while I was working on it and I didn't have anybody else to do them).
I could use some suggestions on the mixdown... there's something a little off about it that I can't quite nail down.
Here are the lyrics:
"I like you and you like me,
Why can't you just let it be,
I want my junk in your trunk,
let's go make computer funk.
Why do you play hard to get,
I know you really liked my set,
I got this bottle let's get drunk,
then we'll make computer funk"
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1. Two Sawtooth Waves
2. Detune first wave +9%
3. Detune second wave -9%
4. ???
5. Profit!
Tbh, I'd say this would work much better as a four to the floor electro-breaks tune, I like the vibe, really 80's and the vocoder is a nice touch. Drums are really a little thin, especially the snare. The sub could be more prominent aswell.. Aargh actually , I dunno, might take away the vibe. Hmm.
Good combination of 2 styles, sounds pro!
Although vocoder stuff in DnB is kinda cheezy, it does have a certain turn on in Electro.
Good melodies too. Nicely mastered.
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sounds really 80's like the theme tunr to manequin or something cheesy like that....mix sounds pretty good throughout...eevrythings nice and clear....good arrangement, lots of variation and change-ups...cool melodies throughout.....lol....kinda addictive this tune....v.cheesy but addictive at the same time...only major criticism would be that the drums could use mroe energy to em....another layer of percussion to fill em out a little more....sounds great tho....good stuff!
i can def see the electro influence, i don't mean to offend u but it sounds a bit cheezy to me. got a kinda danny byrd vibe goin on. not a bad track, just not my cuppa i guess.
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