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Sundancer Sundancer is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Girl In The Rain' and post your comments here!


Hi there,

This is my new track (i'd say 99% finsihed), I spent quite some time trying to make the atmosphere right, hope you'll have patience to listen to it Smile

Feedback appreciated!

Sundancer.

[Update : Track a little bit enhanced, uploaded the new version to myspace.]

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Sundancer: 27-11-2008 12:30.

23-11-2008 21:42 Homepage of Sundancer
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Atmosphere is great loved the build choice! I thought you got the atmosphere pretty damn good. Thoroughly enjoyed this tune man awesome stuff. REally really good track actually you've done well with this one. I cant really say to much except maybe bring that synth out a bit more and the kicks and snares are kinda behind the mix it sounds like.

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23-11-2008 22:25
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great tune.

you can def tell you spent alot of time on the atmosphere. adds alot to the track.

drums sound solid. reece is cool. levels are good.

the atmostheric vocals are the cherry on the cake bro.

i didnt like the phasing or filtering goin on later on later in the track, after the break. but other then then its quality.

nice work. enjoyed it.

24-11-2008 02:00
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Intro is fucking top notch! Beautiful sounds, pure quality shit.

Sorta disappointing drop, I expected the drums to punch way more and the reece to be more heavy in the low frequencies. Maybe work a bit on thse things.

Apart from that, excellent work. Really enjoying the atmospheric soundscape! Agree to bubbly, get rid of the phasing, sounds a bit cheap Tongue .

Cheers!
24-11-2008 17:21 Homepage of Gregg
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Sun dances with the girl in the rain? Tongue (sorry couldn't reist - bad joke!) Happy loooove the atmo in the intro great stuff!

i think compared to the atmo (pads etc) which is very upfront in the mix the beats seem a little distant, defo need to be brought forward a bit more (esp kick n snare) the programming of the beats themselves and the sounds u've used are great - so no complaints there Bigup

i actually like the phasing - as i do it myself nice for that extra bit of movemet, maybe just use it less like in the intro only?

the reece would sound even better with more grittiness on the low mids just so it really crunches thru (imo)

very nice atmospheric tune really feelin this one. i think if u made the bass a bit bigger it would help the whole tune once its dropped to have that bit more impact

still great stuff here, wicked tune!

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24-11-2008 19:27 Homepage of Ketz
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Really great pads and effects. Creates a great wash of atmosphere. That must have taken a fair bit of time! I'd say the bass needs to be slightly more prominant, and there isn't much in the way of sub going on or drum changes in the tune. But other than that it's a wicked roller.

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25-11-2008 15:37 Homepage of c_ctrl
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Stunning stuff!
Love it, very well done.
Mid bass could use a tad stereo and the low end should stay mono.

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25-11-2008 19:00 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Thanks guys for your feedback!

I removed the crappy phaser fx, and enhanced the bass and drums a little bit.

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27-11-2008 12:27 Homepage of Sundancer
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The time you spent on making the atmosphere is paid off. At least i like it Big Grin I really enjoyed the intro but i'd like to hear a bit louder drums and bass when it drops. The buildup is nice. Removing the phaser was a good choice Smile I have to agree with Ketz the atmosphere are too upfront in the mix.
Anyway this is a very nice tune i loved it good work Bigup
27-11-2008 16:06 Homepage of Krisch
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Wow, this is suuuper. This one puts a big smile on my face. Big Grin Definitely up my street. It's probably too late to review this one properly because you've already uploaded a new version to your MySpace page. But I don't really have much to add anyway because I love it. Yes, it was a good move to take the advice and remove the phasing because it's too strong and takes away some of the feel from the beats.

I haven't heard a song of yours I don't like yet! Big Grin

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27-11-2008 20:14 Homepage of Tomos
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lush atmoshpherics and build up, sound really clear and crisp right from the start...intro is a little long i reckon....needs more happenning to keep things interesting.....drums dont cut through the mix enough, kinda drowned out a little by the over-powering pads....they've got lots of energy that keeps things ticking along nicely....think the bass could use boosting a little tbh.....real nice track overall tho...think the pads need to be bought down a little as they're drownning other elements out but great stuff none-the-less...

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29-11-2008 16:28 Homepage of Sephiroth
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haven't listened to the old version so i'll check the myspace version....also add you while i'm there.
Big Grin

Nice start, like the pads, atmos etc. all fit lovely.
nice uplifting vibes.
nice bass filtering in....
yea man, nice beat, although its a touch behind everything in the mix imo. A little parallel compression would help that out a reckon.

That open hat on the snare is a bit over used imo

The vibe on this is lush though. Bigup

Great stuff

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30-11-2008 19:44 Homepage of D2o
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m8, i love intros like this, i think they go down so well at raves, wicked track 2 reminds me of commix a bit, likin ur epic liquid style Smile

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Fantastic intro. Can picture it. Well done.

I don't know why, but this tune reminds me of sitting on an airplane watching the destination video.

Anyway, I can't really find any faults with it. Maybe bring the drums forward slightly. A fantastic piece of work. I see that I finally have a rival on this site Wink

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01-12-2008 13:49
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i could listen to this track over and over again cos the atmospherics are lovely, it was worth spending the time on them! could just do with a little more impact on the drop- needs defining more maybe? little more on the snare too? great track, a pleasure to listen to- 4.9/5!!
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