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BESHAI BESHAI is a male
Beshai


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Please check out my new track 'Exhale' and post your comments here!

Something new on the go looking for some vox to finish er off. all feedback is welcome!

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16-11-2008 20:08 Homepage of BESHAI
N-Vee N-Vee is a male
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I like this every bit of it. Awesome track mate . Vocals not overly necessary this track is great. Don't know much else to say. Sounds good in my ears. Especially like the beginning. Nice melodies Love it.

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16-11-2008 22:34
c_ctrl c_ctrl is a male
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Liking the liquid vibes, not all to my taste but a good tune is a good tune. Beats are nice, maybe not loud enough tho, they kinda get swallowed up by the big bassline. Variation in the melodies is good, it keeps interest up. Beat doesn't change, I'd maybe work on a little bit of variation. Vocals would work nicely on this, very sparsely tho, be careful, it's a busy tune as it is already.

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17-11-2008 02:51 Homepage of c_ctrl
GeeZZ
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i started listn b4 i read u discrip wen i read it i thought naw dont go dont the vox road cuz it will sound like u really tryin to be a pendulum track n cud take away from wot u got

but then all i cud hear thru out was vox in my ed n this tune dont sound finished 2 me know only since i red u gunna but sum vox in tho fucd up!?!!
overall v.gud and forget wat i said bout pendujlem(wateva) v original. do i feel the sub ever slightly under stated maybey jus a tad 2 quiet ? not 100% on that tho
18-11-2008 15:08
GeeZZ
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u know forget that
i think i mean the mid bass 100hz upwards is bit 2loud

usually betta to turn shit down than up n e way jus felt a slight lack of very low end at first but afta readin tomo n listin again...yer

great track!!
18-11-2008 15:13
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Lovely tune, really got into this one. All your tunes have a strong melodic element. Definitely my kinda drum 'n' bass this. I've got nothing bad to say about this, other that perhaps the beats need turning up because they are getting overpowered by the other melodic elements. It sounds like they could do with some compression too to make them fuller and punchier. But overall, a wicked tune mate. What DAW do you use by the way?

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18-11-2008 19:59 Homepage of Tomos
Philthy McNasty Philthy McNasty is a male
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Nice lil liquid intro. Beats sound nice and crisp! The lead in to the drop is way to low in my opinion right before the drum roll. Bass is nice and simple which I think is perfect for a liquid track like this. OK at 2:10 the bleeps before the second drop need to be taken out. Also, the outro reversed pad stutter needs to go as well. Other than that, I hate liquid DnB, but I just look at it from the outside and vote as such. So you have a nice tune for the genre! Booyah

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18-11-2008 20:45 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
BESHAI BESHAI is a male
Beshai


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AFter listening more to this track the Drums are way too quiet. will do a better mix! appreciate all the comments so far.

VOX? ya or nay

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19-11-2008 16:28 Homepage of BESHAI
GeeZZ
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vox yay!!!
21-11-2008 02:56
nosebleednb nosebleednb is a male
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I'm a fan of this style of house-y deep dance floor dnb tracks, not enough of them these days. Composition is spot on but the sounds could have been a bit better, especially in the drum part. LFO-y pads add a great vibe to this piece, and strings top it off. A solid track overall, good job.
Zack

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21-11-2008 07:39 Homepage of nosebleednb
Ketz Ketz is a male
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hi there Happy nice beat, rollin, hihats are shining very niceley indeed. definately feelin the melodic / rhythmic elements.

nice build up although personally i think when u stop that rise pad suddenly it doesn't flow as well as if u had maybe left it to the end or maybe brought another element for a split second before the drop (personal pref talkin lol)

ya as ctrl said the beat gets swalloed up a bit when after the drop by the other elements but still really great melodies lovin that Bigup

vocal would work a treat as the icing on the cake. nice stuff mate keep em coming! Big Grin

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22-11-2008 15:22 Homepage of Ketz
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