 Patlabor - Wasted Civilization |
Patlabor
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Registration Date: 07-04-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Wasted Civilization' and post your comments here!
Sooooo, had a useless day today.. headache from last night and this is the result-
didnt use any presets or something.. mostly from sine or saw so thats always more fun.. to do
hoezeee 
harde bazen
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10-11-2008 02:22 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Needs basses and highspeed drums or you could turn it into dubstep pretty well. Good sounds, good melodies, nice atmosphere.
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10-11-2008 23:31 |
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c_ctrl
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Registration Date: 02-06-2008
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This has a pretty cool Breaks feel. Kinda Crystal Method-y vibes going on. I love breaks as much as DnB so I'd say don't change it at all lol. The main lead sound sounds better when its stuttery and not as a pad, but thats my only critiscism.. oh and some of the panning and volume effects are odd, might be when effects are kicking in but maybe have a check of that too..
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11-11-2008 01:43 |
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DaMann
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Registration Date: 10-11-2008
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Very creepy eerie intro. I like the bass fading in and out. The drums are sick with the synth combined. One of the synths around 2:20 is kind of uncalled for, maybe use a filter and rapidly turn it up to higher frequencies so it sounds more "welcome". Not much tension building, it's good but just constant drums banging that awesome beat. What does Patlabor mean? I really like the ending though, fades out, the bass or cello, with that cool synth, I think you should add drums to the end, seems like a perfect place for one last session.
Great track!
-DaMann
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12-11-2008 04:12 |
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N-Vee
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Registration Date: 07-11-2008
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This is certainly interesting . The synths were a bit loud and overpowered everything a lot. I thought it was going to be interesting from the beginning and it was. Is this breaks? sorry I don't listen to much breaks. It is fun playin around not using any presets but it is good to find presets you like and play around with them to suit you which makes it easier instead of starting from scratch.
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12-11-2008 09:14 |
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Sephiroth
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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like the synth work in in the intro.....at time the resonance on the synths seem a little too much, kinda hurting my ears...too high-pitched, id remove some of the high-end on some of the synth layers...drums sound a bit weak when they come in...dont really hit hard enough to create enough of a rhythm...balance sounds really off cuz of the drums, synths drown everything else out....track would definietely benefit from some low-end aswell....never sounds like it really drops without bass....the structure and arrangment seems a little messy and unorganised too...like the synth work but defo needs some work...just doesn't sound complete..
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