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EZ Dotbe
Took a while to get this one together.
Bit of an amen roller but stickin to my usual atmospheric melodic shizzle.
Thnx to Ketz and MinasTirithGuard for some advance feedback
Song Title came from seeing pictures in the arrangement page fully zoomed out
All your feedback and comments welcome, reckon the final mixdown might need some tweaks.
amen sounds crisp likin it mate
nice little filter work on it too... sets the mood - i like the way starts off minimalist then the atmo comes in
arrangement wise its workin really well that subtle wobble on the bass i luuurve
it reminds me of sum stuff i heard on liquid v u da man!
really nice atmo lots of nice little sounds all complimenting each other beautifully. overall really feelin this one man, you've arranged it into a really nice piece here
no complaints mr havoc sir, as i still got some credits left from my donation i've already downloaded it (as player was acting up for some reason) and wil be sure to rinse this in my car
Nice liquid intro- the break filtering was a ballsy move but I think it works out.
Really like what you did with your string melodies- very nice.
Break seems to skip for a beat at 1:28. I think that the break is a little loud and overwhelms the other elements of the mix somewhat.
I'm feeling the arrangement in this version, definitely an improvement over the earlier one you sent me.
I think in the darker section you could do with a bit more mid-bass sounds, or a bigger sub.
Overall I think the break should evolve a bit more- one thing I love about some of your other work is the way you transition through different cymbal sounds to give a slightly different feel. I think the cymbals could be brought up a little in here.
Overall I think it could use a few tweaks to the mixdown to accentuate the melodies a little more, but the overall ideas and structure are very solid.
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09-11-2008 22:27
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Really nice tune bro. I would suggest cleaning up the auto eqing of the drums in the intro a bit faster or playing with it a bit more like up down up down. Could use a bit more sub maybe? Defo play some more with the bass and make some sicker sounds with autos and shit. Overall very nice tune bro. Peace.
Nice bro awesome stuff!! great tune lovin your composition of the strings. Everything else is fantastic too. Certainly enjoyed listening to it. This track is hot and I'd certainly buy it. Good one mate!!! Right up there bro...All the other synths you brought in later worked to. I think the structure of this song was perfect. I'll certainly be lookin out for more of your tunes!. Wicked mate love it. Although havn't listened to it yet in my monitors but it sounded very good in my headphones. 110% for my likin.
Like it, it's audible that a lot of work went into this. Somehow the drums seem to have a life of their own and the rest of the tune doesn't "absorb" them, they sound very dry, steppy and a tad harsh, I think this would work much better with different drums.
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I think your drums need a bit more punch, sound a bit weak to me. Maybe need another light drum pattern in their to liven thing up. Also, your snare drum sounds like it is being pulled up. I reckon change the snare and maybe chuck a few bongos in for good measure
Nicely crisp drums, and I think they work well with the overall liquid feel of the synths.. I think the contrast between the heavier drums and the synth work is great, especially when the synths get darker at 4.00 .. wasn't expecting that. There isn't much that I can critiscise about this.. although I am trying hard lol. Very nice work.
nice intro, drums sound great, that pad is awesome, real liquid-jazzy feel, reminds me of high contrast.....sub seems a bit weak imo...think theres room for more sub....lush feel to this tune throughout....drums are great, i think a harder kick would beef em up some, they seem slighter louder thean other elements in the mix, makes em sound a little out of place....arrangement and strcuture are fine, no complaints there....some real impressive synth work throughout.....great track overall, nice clear mix and wicked vibes...good stuff!!
Definitely feeling this although I'd agree with Battle about the beats not geling with the other melodies. They sound like they weren't made for this track, if you know what I mean. Also, they sound a tad too loud to me.
Melodies are very strong throughout. This seems to be your area of expertise now. Something we all look forward to hearing.
Good work bro.
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Yo man you sent this to me over aim, new profile woot woot ^_^
Sucks cause i need to do those minimum reviews to get prod. rights, but i have flash 10 so its like a cycle of not-working-ness :\
Whatever
As always your songs are sick as hell man, definitely a new vibe for you but amazing all the same. Maybe more in this style would be fun, and i would love to hear more like this. don't get me wrong, i love the old dancefloor-smasher vibes you had going on but this is fresh and new. a nice break.
The drums are a bit loud and punchy in the mix; songs like these usually have a little bit more laid back drums, bu its cool, mastered well and everything. I would ahve also like a bit more variation in the drums but whatever. no other complaints.
Until i get producer rights (
) you can always ask to hear my new track on aim, finally made a DnB track. long break.
well anyways, keep up the righteous work.
Zack
nice little filter work on it too... sets the mood - i like the way starts off minimalist then the atmo comes in 
) you can always ask to hear my new track on aim, finally made a DnB track. long break.