I don't really like your initial choice of kick and snare- they're not punchy enough.
The little breakdown at 1:04 is pretty cool, but I think the bass is a bit weak at the drop. Beats work, but the bassline is a bit too simple for my taste.
Not much else I can say as this isn't a full track yet.
i agree with minas, the kick isnt that nice, snare could be layered. and yeah, the track needs more power after 1:25, you could definitely add some other bass, fx or reece
It takes too long until this tune really really starts, try layering a break on those drums.
Intro would sound much better with some extra elements.
The kick drum is to highpitched and very punchy, the snare sounds cut off. The idea of using different snares isn't too great. The bass sounds a bit muffled and the bassline is a bit uninspired.
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to be honest, I'd stick to ur normal style with the metallic snares etc an the crazy off beat drums. I think the drums need more bits inbetween on a track like this, some nice glitchy sounds on the drop tho.
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Yeap I pretty much agree with everyone here. I like your different thought in style but I didn't so much like the kick and snare but thought the ideas and everything else was AWESOME!!! WAS VERY COOL. I like to here different stuff like this to get things rollin. You should finish it... change the kick snare give some real good punch and smash it with that snare. Then change it up a bit after the drop with the breaks and bassline. cool ideas though.
To be honest, the intro is really boring, it needs more elements. Smae with the beat. Theres something wrong with the snare aswell, it doesn't lock in.
Can't really comment much more on this mate, but definitely not one of your better tracks.
ez Pytch. yeah kick is too "clicky" use another sound if u want a bit of high end on it just layer a hihat on there
snare really snappy, the 2nd snare u use can get a bit annoying after a while maybe try using another sample again?
bit of a crazy intro u got going here
could use a proper hook etc once its dropped and some more interest in the beat (breaks) to help it roll more