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Pytchlocka Pytchlocka is a male
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Pytchlocka: 09-11-2008 18:00.

09-11-2008 17:59 Homepage of Pytchlocka
Phalanx Phalanx is a male
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I don't really like your initial choice of kick and snare- they're not punchy enough.

The little breakdown at 1:04 is pretty cool, but I think the bass is a bit weak at the drop. Beats work, but the bassline is a bit too simple for my taste.

Not much else I can say as this isn't a full track yet.

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09-11-2008 22:45 Homepage of Phalanx
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i agree with minas, the kick isnt that nice, snare could be layered. and yeah, the track needs more power after 1:25, you could definitely add some other bass, fx or reece

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Yo

Groove is pretty good, some good incidental fx, drops not bad but it pretty quickly gets a bit repetitive, bassline needs to do more

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10-11-2008 17:29 Homepage of Binary Havoc
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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It takes too long until this tune really really starts, try layering a break on those drums.
Intro would sound much better with some extra elements.
The kick drum is to highpitched and very punchy, the snare sounds cut off. The idea of using different snares isn't too great. The bass sounds a bit muffled and the bassline is a bit uninspired.
Not bad at all though, keep working!

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10-11-2008 23:21 Homepage of BattleDrone
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to be honest, I'd stick to ur normal style with the metallic snares etc an the crazy off beat drums. I think the drums need more bits inbetween on a track like this, some nice glitchy sounds on the drop tho.

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11-11-2008 20:41 Homepage of Timmi
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Yeap I pretty much agree with everyone here. I like your different thought in style but I didn't so much like the kick and snare but thought the ideas and everything else was AWESOME!!! WAS VERY COOL. I like to here different stuff like this to get things rollin. You should finish it... change the kick snare give some real good punch and smash it with that snare. Then change it up a bit after the drop with the breaks and bassline. cool ideas though.

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12-11-2008 09:22
c_ctrl c_ctrl is a male
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To be honest, the intro is really boring, it needs more elements. Smae with the beat. Theres something wrong with the snare aswell, it doesn't lock in.

Can't really comment much more on this mate, but definitely not one of your better tracks.

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12-11-2008 23:41 Homepage of c_ctrl
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez Pytch. yeah kick is too "clicky" use another sound if u want a bit of high end on it just layer a hihat on there Tongue snare really snappy, the 2nd snare u use can get a bit annoying after a while maybe try using another sample again?

bit of a crazy intro u got going here Big Grin could use a proper hook etc once its dropped and some more interest in the beat (breaks) to help it roll more

get it finished matey Wink

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13-11-2008 14:14 Homepage of Ketz
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