Lots of good ideas but the structure seems very disjointed to me. It never gets out of 3rd gear. It needs a section where everything is rollin full-on. The bassline melody is very good. It's certainly got my head bobbin. But it sounds very muffled to me because it's lacking highs. I'd think about layering another bass on top with a decent amount of highs. A bit of extra distortion would also help the bass sound. By the way, I really don't like that DC FX sample. Sounds out of place to me. But overall, an interesting listen. Needs fine-tuning tho.
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This is alright I find that your bass is really sitting in behind everything which I can't really say much cos I have problems with it too. but it's a cool track man. Could use a sharper and a short kick and a snare so it sounds solid. The idea of the song and the structure is very cool i like it.
nice sounds in the intro, builds a wierd atmosphere...nice ideas on the bassline...think it lacks mid-range tho and sounds a bit bass heavy...drums roll quite nicely if a little quiet...defo got energy to em tho...nice bass variations....think the high end rides and percussion could be boosted on the drums, they dont sound bright enough...some real cool little stutter fx, loving them....good tune overall...let down a bit by the mix...drums sound a bit dull and need more high-end and the bass could use a bit more mid-range imo....
Good ideas, problems in mixdown, stereo field and master. It all sounds pretty flat, thin, cold...
You need to work that master, use multiband compression, a warmifier, ...
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another original piece here and melodies again im feeling - i would say vibe and melodies are definately one of ur strong points
vocal is wicked
structure a bit disjointed but i noticed thats a trait in ur tunes so i wont wanna tell u to be too conventional, i don't think its good of me to encourage such behaviour too much
did u say somewhere that u produce on crap speakers etc to get that sound?
i still think thouh it the mix - could sparkle more, bit muffled as the guys have said