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dNk 
Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 29-02-2004
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I welcome you people. I here the newcomer and as recently started to be engaged in music in style dnb. I have made one track, it is my first track so I ask you help please, prompt as me it to finish with a normal condition that in it does not suffice and how to make quality this track udilyon would be better that attention. Thanks... 
http://www.zone.ee/klopik/dNk%20-%20Get%20Started.mp3 
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29-02-2004 21:36 |
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Muad'Dib
Andrejnalin
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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Let's try some women spice on dnb... 
Nice begining... that rave sample should not be cut off like that... let it flow with the rythym. But it is well compiled with the rest of the tune.
The jungle rhytm rules! Maybe it's getting borring some time, but nevermind - it is excellent!
The song is little dull from 1:30 to 2:05... maybe because the low-level bass line, that is constant... not so much interesting. Try adding some melody, compiled of high-level (pitched up) bass line.
But, this is what you HAVE to learn girl - always add compressor to your patterns!! For instance, at 2:45, that bass line is on, killing the snares. Add compressor to the bass line, snare, and kick. You can add the "gain" to the kick, for it is virtually gone! There is no kick, except sometimes, when it is heard only as ghost kick, but not real.
So, where was I? Ahh.. yeah... compressor:
add to the bassline, every instrument and such... then, add to the main, out mixer channel. That should keep the overpowerfull patterns compiled nice with the snares and the kicks.
Nice song, 4/5 from me! Enjoy... and welcome in da club..
Test "Test it
" .mp3 in theListen Page !
Enjoy...
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Muad'Dib: 29-02-2004 22:40.
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29-02-2004 22:27 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Ah, my samplepacks are usefull
The sounds you use are well chosen. But the buildups need lots of work. You sould make transitions instead of just cutting away things and throwing in others.
A but weird: the whole track sounds like you timestretched it. This is especially harmfull to the breaks.
The beaks are nice, but you'd better cut up that loop and play with it, becouse it's way to straight now, it needs variation.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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01-03-2004 14:58 |
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