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marukomu marukomu is a male
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Please check out my new track ''cities'' and post your comments here!

Short preview clip of a track called 'Cities' I'm working on. Feedback welcomed and appreciated. Thanks. 160kbps.

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04-11-2008 17:16 Homepage of marukomu
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I like how the drums have little impact in the intro and then smash big on the drop.
Good basses, good feel-FX.
Nice track, could stand out with the right bit dirty synth hook on top here and there and maybe some phone conversation-like voice-over.

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04-11-2008 18:25 Homepage of BattleDrone
Ketz Ketz is a male
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i like the transposing of the amens Big Grin hey u got some car horns in there Big Grin would be nice to gather more elements that compliment the vibe

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05-11-2008 20:23 Homepage of Ketz
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whoops sorry pressed enter by accident lol

ok so yeah beat when it drops is phat mate! its got a really nice shine to it as well Big Grin also the arrangement its a nice "offbeat" kinda beat so defo keeps me interested (and i'm sure it keeps the ravers on their toes as to keepin up with the crazy rhythm - i remember me and my mates back in the day used to love tunes like this - it was a challenge and we could show everyone up on the dancefloor with this kinda shizzle Big Grin )

really really nice work man, big ups!!!

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05-11-2008 20:27 Homepage of Ketz
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wot can i say-HEVVY TRACK!!!nice intro-like the atmosphere n amen and then drops out into the grimeeey bass while that synth sound is going-nice fxs n stuff aswell.the main drop is pure mayhem-mental beats!-thought you couldv changed somethin bout that synth from the intro-but still sounds phat.fair play on this one.really look 4ward to hear it finished
05-11-2008 22:15
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nice drum work in the intro,

like the lil stab, nice bass in breakdown. although there is a high passed(?) sound layered over it im not so keen on.

Nice, works nicely. drums are pretty mad but that's your style!

nice edits and variations throughout but when it gets to 2.40ish im expecting more substantial differences as its getting a little repetitive.

Nice tune so far though mate, sound quality is top dollar.
I'd maybe add a lil more sub and some more low level atmospheric sounds to tie it all together a touch more


Bigup

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06-11-2008 10:06 Homepage of D2o
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Cheers for the input guys. Cool

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07-11-2008 16:29 Homepage of marukomu
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Intro was good like the build with the stabs and the wobbling bass. The breaks were also cool so good job on that. The drop is good to nice and heavy stuff and good change up of breaks on the drop. One thing I would have done is add a little more variety to the bassline. Good job on the whole structure of the song though I liked it all overall mate nice track!

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08-11-2008 02:39
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Going to go back into this and make some changes. Got a label interested in it. I'll put up a new clip when it's done. Cheers.

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Intro I was unsure about, with the horns and beeps and stuff.. I thought it detracted from the atmosphere. The drop was great, The beats are good but the snare is slightly lost in there, especially with the hats at that level. The bass cuts though nicely and nothing is really fighting for space. Nice edits aswell, keeps things moving along nicely. Great mixdown aswell.

Nice one on getting a lebel to look at it!

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OMG that bass is nasssssty. Dig the amen edit intro too. What the hell is with the car horn tho, I mean I get it by the name of the title, but it throws you off for a sec. Love the drop except the "uuuhhhh vocal" that soooo many ppl have used it tracks. Once the hi hat comes in got my head bobbing instantly. I definetly dig this alot. Good preview!

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13-11-2008 06:16 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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Oh man, nobody is digging the carhorns? Shocked I thought they were a bit quirky and added a bit of atmosphere not ruined it! The first version is being club tested this weekend so when the reports come back that everybody in the dance stopped and shouted "whats the fucking deal with the horns on this track?" I'll take them out... Tongue

I do agree about the 'uhh', it has been rinsed in a lot of tracks but I think it's one of the best 'uhh' samples out there. I'll have a play with some other grunts and see how they work. Cheers.

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13-11-2008 09:45 Homepage of marukomu
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Final version now up on myspace: www.myspace.com/marukomu

Forthcoming 2009 on Broken Audio Recordings.

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