 CLARKFADER - Solar Flare "unfinished" |
CLARKFADER
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Please check out my new track 'Solar Flare "unfinished"' and post your comments here!
hi there , i have not made a dnb tune 4 ages , just bin makin dubstep , but this tune came from a beat i made ages ago , i really liked it but i forgot about it , and i stumbled across it about 3 weeks ago and put this together , i hope it sounds ok , ive put quite a bit of work into it , but my ears r fucked 
, its not finished , so please be kind as i have not made a dnb track 4 a long time , maybe a bit rusty 
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anyway made on ABLETON 7 , hope u N-JOY !!!!
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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02-11-2008 16:00 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Beat sounds double it seems like you tried to enhance the stereo field in some way.... This takes away power from the drumhits, keep it mono. Tune has no real bassline or anything, it's just atmosphere and beats right now.
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03-11-2008 11:54 |
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BESHAI
Beshai
Registration Date: 17-05-2008
Posts: 100
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like the drums right from the start. sounds really good. kick could stand out a bit more. gets a little better around 25 seconds though. needs more distinction. like that layer that comes in around 33 seconds or so. at 40 seconds or so the drums sound much better but the kick could use more mid range imo. not bad at all.
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03-11-2008 16:53 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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The first beat sounds like an untouched DC loop? You need to give that loop your own twist. Also, like Battle said, make your beats mono because they are much more direct and in-you-face that way. Stereo panning usually weakens beats.
I'd agree with the others that it's a little too sparse atm. There's no real bassline to speak of and because of that the whole tune lacks drive. The melodies and atmosphere you've got so far have potential, they would make a good background to a fat bassline.
Still needs a lot of work this one.
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03-11-2008 19:39 |
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mescA
...aka zepH....
Registration Date: 02-08-2008
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wow a very smooth track
the pad i like really much. it has a taste of dreaming and fits very well to the break
but for my taste the bassline could be a bit more for my opinion it's a bit to little..
the break in the middle is very good placed and has very very nice buildup but if you place a "phatter" bassline there would be hot like hell, but anyway it's just my taste
what would also be very nice if you ad a femal vocal or a nice chorus, then i think you have a perfect dream liquid tune
but all in all a very hot track, thumbs up
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04-11-2008 16:18 |
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Sephiroth
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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intro could use more elements to it, not enough going on to sustain interest...drums sound a little flat too....and panned a bit wierd....id keep the kick and snare mono then you can place hats, shakers etc around them....drop is a bit weak, cant feel any bass, defo needs some sub as it just sounds empty without one....good use of automation on the drums but they need more variation and a much bigger kick and snare, they dont punch enough at the mo....some good ideas but sounds too empty at the mo...
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