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tryptech 
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Subsonik Doa Rmx' and post your comments here!
did my best on this on,
didnt really master it yet
kisses
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02-11-2008 15:12 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Pad melody doesn't sync with drums in the intro.
Tune seems to be 5 layers: drums, bass,pads, lead and vocals and it sounds like you switch these layers on and off, sometimes this is done quite rough like at 3:05.
Pads are way too loud.
Is this a remix of an existing track based on a sample pack?
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02-11-2008 20:00 |
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DJ ANARKY
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nice hats to start wiv-v.long intro-seem 2 go on forever-if im right doesn't drop till gone 2mins!to me sounds more like trance than d&b-no offence!tune really aint my cup of tea but good luck wiv it neways
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03-11-2008 17:31 |
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Tomos
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You have a really good basis here to make a big, accessable, dance-floor friendly tune. Trouble is, the mix needs a lot of attention before it gets anywhere near its potential. For instance, I'd definitely remove some of the strange panning FX on the vocals. Also, the beats are too far back in the mix, the pads are too loud and so too are the vocals. Also, the way you've structured this track makes it sound long and a little tiresome.
That being said, I actually really like the melodies and the vibes you have here. Do you work on FL? If so, I'd love to have a bash at remixing and 'remastering' this one. 
I really feel it has lots of potential to be a big, dancefloor smasher.
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03-11-2008 19:58 |
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Sephiroth
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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nice intro, filtered drums sound cool, you should filter the crash too tho sounds out of place....maybe raise the pads a bit they sound good but loud enough....vocals are cool, maybe a bit more reverb on em to push em to the background a bit...structure is pretty good, takes a far while to build up tho....drop is a bit of anti-climax after a massive, massive build up...drums sound really weak and the sub needs compressing to even it out a bit...drums defo need more layers...this tune has got the right idea...really cheesy but all the elements are there for a great track...jus a bad mix lets it down and a bit of varaition would sort it out a bit too....would fuggin love to remix this man...cool ideas throughout.
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