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28-10-2008 16:13 |
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rez
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hey cool intro there, drums have a nice impact when they drop. pad creates a cool vibe.
i'd make the sub a few db louder, would give the early part (starting at 0:43) more energy. synths are ok...
nice part at the end, like it, track switches too suddenly though (2:53)
overall a pretty nice tune, keep it up!
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28-10-2008 16:30 |
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tryptech
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28-10-2008 16:32 |
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2clix
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Mr scaranja
first off the vocal is nasty, a lil inaudible with the filter sweeps but still sounds cool
Arpeggio thing sounds very techno I like it personally but it may be a bit overused in the
scheme of things
beat coming in sounds real good, then you flip the script with the new beat with the crisp hats not really feelin that I woulda just kept the first beat and just chopped it up for edits
then you bring it back with the reece
2nd break would have liked to heard that vocal used a lil differently build is ok but I think you can make it a tad more interesting
beats are a lil confusing with the silences sounds cool though maybe just that moderately or make a half time beat with that effect would sound dope imo
It kinda sounds like two tracks though tbh
I enjoyed the listen
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28-10-2008 16:42 |
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Ketz
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28-10-2008 19:50 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, I'd deffo agree with the comments so far. It certainly sounds like two tracks in one. As for personal preference, I think the second half of the tune is much, much heavier and much, much stronger as a dnb tune. The first half is a little too techno orientated for me, and maybe for a lot of other dnb heads too.
Anyway, I think your beats are well EQed, especially during the second section. Very heavy (perhaps the kick is a very slightly too loud tho) and hard. Basslines, FX are all spot on for me.
Overall, a solid tune. Oh, and did I mention I prefered the second section? 
I'd deffo concentrate on getting a whole tune from that section, cos it's a winner.
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28-10-2008 20:01 |
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Sounds great. Very entertaining, liking the dark part as well, although it sounds like it is a second tune being mixed in.
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29-10-2008 12:35 |
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Wally D
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Loving the drum change ups.I'm not sure if there is any low end or its just me.I would tone down the arp a tad.
The second drop is killer and I hear the sub comming thru a bit more.Real cool swinging sweeping vibe on the second drop.
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29-10-2008 17:06 |
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Sephiroth
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decent build up, drums are nice and rolling, some of the variations dont fit too well imo...nice vocal sample, a little hard to hear tho with all that automation going on, gets lost amounst other things...that synth sound like the 3xosc preset arpeggio king (man i use fl way too much)...synth sounds too dry, could use some reverb and chorus/ phaser/ flanger.....2:03 loving it now, everything has picked up the pace a bit, sub has come forward a bit...structure is ok, little random and different sections could flow together a bit better, overall mix is pretty decent and some real nice ideas going on, especially towards the end when things darken up a bit....good stuff overall.
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30-10-2008 23:39 |
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