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Pytchlocka Pytchlocka is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Koncretize [previously Drastik]' and post your comments here!

Didn't really wanna put full... but whatever.... New version with fixed problems and more taste. Enjoy..
25-10-2008 15:28 Homepage of Pytchlocka
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez Pytch Happy cool intro in the fx i likes! i think especially for someone your age ur doing bloody well for urself!! big ups!

small critique, the intro, only fx / pads no beat then drop i think u could hint at the drop comin a bit more Big Grin

fuckin hell this is dark heavy n nasty when it drops. i just noticed u haven't got a snare, only a kick n rides / hihats? oh wait 3:15 it comes in Tongue (but u take the kick out and only leave the snare in?)

definately not a conventional dnb tune, snare hit is really tumpin, maybe a bit too much?

one for the nutters out there, i'm getting concerned about how dark ur tunes are becoming Big Grin

5:00 is more like it, more conventional, i think this would work much better across the whole tune mate, gets even more crazy right at the end pure madness, not sure if i can handle it (i never thought the day would come when i thought i would say that lol)

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25-10-2008 16:07 Homepage of Ketz
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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A lot of elements in the intro sound very lo-fi, as if they were taken from very low quality mp3's or something like that.
A lot of hissing elements going on, maybe the not so upper high end (5-10kHz) should be lowered a tad. When mastering the low end could have been a bit phatter. I'm not a big fan of this style and find most tracks boring and repetitive pretty soon. This one is quite ok though. I don't understand why you end the tune with such a nice bass which would have worked very well in the main parts too. The tune has improved a lot from the preview though. Good work.

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25-10-2008 18:21 Homepage of BattleDrone
Tomos Tomos is a male
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This is the drum 'n' bass equivalent of death metal. Big Grin Not really my style - sounds like a machine gun, not enough groove for me - but others will like it. For the most part, it's well EQed and sounds pretty nice on the ears. Super use of FX too, they add a lots of atmosphere. I had images of other-worldly battles when listening to this.

Love that beat at 4.58. Now that's the kinda groove I was talking about. Big Grin It gets even better when those rides are added.

8+ mins is probably too long for this cos it gets a bit repetitve. 6 or 7 mins would have been enough I reckon.

Nice one.

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26-10-2008 10:30 Homepage of Tomos
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the intro is fuckin sick mate, really love it. after that, the mid-part does get a little bit repetetive. The last 2 minutes too, you could definitely add more variations at those parts.
all in all, this tune is really nice, enjoyed listening to it.

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27-10-2008 13:09
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hi
intro atmoz is good could be more clear, some equal to do. kick is muffled with the bass and I hear no snare is that th emeaning.

Keep up
and like a big fat snare
LIMEWAX STYLE

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28-10-2008 16:23 Homepage of tryptech
Sephiroth Sephiroth is a male
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nice fx in intro, cool panning effects too, intro seems like it needs a main pad or main element to gel it all together tho....nice feeling of tension tho. a few sound qaulity issues when bass comes in, really sounds like ur pushing it too far...makes the levels uneven and sounds too squahsed and flat....drop is a bit dissapointing after a nice build up...taking out the snare completely destroys the sense of rhythm this track could have, structure could use some work and it defo need smore varaition, gets quite repititve quite quickly....sub could use a little boosting, sounds a little lost behind the drum elements....not a bad tune overall, original but needs more varaition and work on the mixdown imo. i think 8 mins is way too long aswell...not enough going on to sustain interest for that long.

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29-10-2008 23:39 Homepage of Sephiroth
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