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brucifer brucifer is a male
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Please check out my new track '=[' and post your comments here!

Something I have been playing with for the last couple of day. Made with Reason 3.

Any comments are appreciated. Thanks Happy

PS. No reverb was used or abused in this production.

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20-10-2008 12:18
Phalanx Phalanx is a male
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I find your lack of reverb... disturbing.

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20-10-2008 17:21 Homepage of Phalanx
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I find your lack of reverb... disturbing.


Sorry Big Grin

Next mix will be pure reverb just for you. Happy

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20-10-2008 21:51
Ketz Ketz is a male
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hi Bruce! Big Grin mate u gotta get onto Reason 4!! do it! lol

right quite slow, bouncey number here beat needs more groove get some breaks layered in there to get it rollin, more movement. kick n snare need to really punch thru more boost em Drummer

cool ideas man, yeah i noticed its quite a dry tune in terms of....verb Tongue

so my only other main suggestion would be to get more texture to that reece stab bass synth sound just to get more presence in there

nice stuff overall - nice to hear sumthin from ya after sooo long! :bigp:

edit - snare needs more snap more high end so it cuts thru the mix better Wink

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20-10-2008 22:02 Homepage of Ketz
Phalanx Phalanx is a male
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I actually didn't listen to it yet... so here's your review!

Intro is interesting, some cool shuffle to it.

I think that the bass is way too wide and just doesn't do it for me- it's a little too plain for compared to the other interesting things happening in the track. It overwhelms the mix a bit.

Beats work, I like the little vocal chop.

Could use a little reverb on the mids/highs but I would apply it sparingly.

Tune is a bit repetitive but I really like the ideas behind it.

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20-10-2008 22:18 Homepage of Phalanx
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Ez, thanks for listening.

I will chuck a bit of verb in. Just a touch mind Wink I don't want any more death threat from Tomos Mad Big Grin

The bass isn't really right. I need to work on it and come up with something better. I did have a totally different base to it, but I have got influenced by Noisia - Block Control in the last couple of day. I've just discovered who it was by. Might have to seek it down Big Grin

I havn't brought Reason 4 yet. I was looking into it the other day and was tempted. But... My computer suffers enough from 3, so a computer upgrade is more required. Not doing that either, because I may be leaving NZ soon.

On the reason 4 thing. The shop I called in was selling reason 4 for about $700 or the upgrade for $199. I asked if I could buy the upgrade without the membership card (which I have) and the shop said it was no problem and suggested I find a key on the net Huh Not to sure how propellerheads would feel about that! Mad

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20-10-2008 23:12
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The bass isn't really right. I need to work on it and come up with something better. I did have a totally different base to it, but I have got influenced by Noisia - Block Control in the last couple of day. I've just discovered who it was by. Might have to seek it down Big Grin


fuckin sick tune!!!! funn y u say u just saw it, i only saw taht vid 1st time about a week ago, been listening non stop ever since!!! Drummer Drummer

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21-10-2008 10:33 Homepage of Ketz
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On the reason 4 thing. The shop I called in was selling reason 4 for about $700 or the upgrade for $199. I asked if I could buy the upgrade without the membership card (which I have) and the shop said it was no problem and suggested I find a key on the net Huh Not to sure how propellerheads would feel about that! Mad


do u own a legit copy of Reason 3 mate? I am a registered owner of version 2 (my sis bought it as an xmas presie for me eyars ago) i upgraded to 4 earlier this year cost me abuot £80 bargain considering what u get!

although the shop owners there told me same thing as urs that all u need is a key and u can sort it Wink

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21-10-2008 10:35 Homepage of Ketz
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track is kool, the bass is too wide tho, it dosnt thunp like that. sham cause the melody of the bass is really good.
21-10-2008 14:32
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BLOCK CONTROL FTW Drummer

Ez Brucey long time aye,

Likin the minimalist beats, although like ketz said it'd prolly be more interesting with some layered breaks to give it some life

chopped up vocal stab works

I think you could find a better bass for this track as this one sounds most distorted and not really in the hardcore way

melody is nice it compliments the beats

all in all good track good ideas, still in its early stages so I'm expecting sumfin nasty when its finished Drummer

Reverb.... ehhh... whatevs

peace kid

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21-10-2008 18:39
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Intro doesn't catch me. Bass is to dirty and distorted, it seems to be overpowered as other sounds suffer from it. Has potential but needs work.

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21-10-2008 21:35 Homepage of BattleDrone
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quote:
Originally posted by brucifer
I don't want any more death threat from Tomos Mad Big Grin


Death

Well, it appears my threat of a hate campaign against you and your reverb-loving associates must have worked cos this is super dry. Big Grin In all seriousness mate, it sounds much, much better. There's lots of clarity now, whereas before (in your previous tune) it was very mushy.

Yeah, the bass is panned a little too wide. It would probably sound much stronger and heavier if it was centred. Basses always do. It's probably a little too distorted as well, like Battle mentioned. A bit of extra melody would work really nicely on the bass.

The other melodic elements are really good. They have a nice flow to them and I can hear traces of early dnb influences there.

Beats are decent enough. A little more oophm would be nice but you're on the right track with them.

Cool stuff so far captain. Cool

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23-10-2008 20:04 Homepage of Tomos
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