Please check out my new track 'Riproar' and post your comments here!
made this on cubase,goin 4 a dark soundin tune-cant make up my mind if the synth goes with the bassline?ne feedback/comments/critisiscm much appreciated-(reviews on here really have been helping)safe all!
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Drums are missing impact, hihats sound random, no groove in them.
Bass sounds repetitive. Lead doesn't fit to the bass because it sounds very similar to the bass sound.
Choice of sounds and the structure need work.
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18-10-2008 21:48
DJ ANARKY unregistered
ye fair comments-tbh as soon as the track finished uploadin i regretted it straight away-am guna work hard on a cupple tracks over next cupple weeks n not post ne more shit till then! appreciate review-safe!
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yeah i like the melodies in the intro sets the mood - dark grimey shizzle. does get a bit repetitive after its dropped (although it needs a proper drop as it kinda just progresses as 1 piece from start to end). as it goes on would be good to get some more edits going on to keep it interesting
drums as bd said need more punch snare sounds really thin could do with maybe another layer with more low end also get more layers for movement on the beat in general
anyways no worries u still gna work on it as u said so look forward to a newer version!
i do like the grimey bass, but yeah as said, it all gets too repetetive. you should definitely play around with the bass and create some wild/crazy sounds, like every 16 bars.
imo, the hihats are goodl (not in the intro though, totally out of place there), the only problem is that they dont work with the beat that well.
like ketz said, beat needs to be layered, also some variation there would not be a miss
riproar is a good name for this tune
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by rez: 24-10-2008 00:15.
I think its always best to start off by pointing out the positives rather than the negatives with reviews such as this.I liked the bass and the synths actually,although they maybe could have done with slight changes here and there in notes and pitch to give the track more variety.I think the bass could pump nicely through a decent sound system.On a negative note id say the tune sounds a bit unfinished and that it could do with some extra sounds to beef it up a bit,it sounds a bit plain to a degree and possibly a bit repetitive.I also found the hi hats a little irritating and repetitive,personally id alter this as they sound a bit tinny.Maybe a bit more variety in the drum pattern would be nice aswell.All in all not a bad effort.
intro sounds promising but the the drums come in. they just dont stand out. i think you need to sort you levels out and try mono'ing every chanel cause i think there is way to much stereo going on there bro.
yeah i like the melodies in the intro sets the mood - dark grimey shizzle. does get a bit repetitive after its dropped (although it needs a proper drop as it kinda just progresses as 1 piece from start to end). as it goes on would be good to get some more edits going on to keep it interesting 
