Vocal needs compression to get it all at the same level. You were holding back too much when singing at some points. Tune needs more funk, it's just running, the "shake" is missing a bit.
Not a bad tune though.
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hehe pretty cool that you use selfmade vocals
practice will help, but you really need to invest time if you want to improve. ok this basically true for everything
i somehow miss a stronger bass / reece commin in, why dont you continue the one appearing at 3:23? also you could give the beat more punch, making the tune more energetic
all in all pretty nice and chilled, i like it
Yeah, I'd deffo agree with Battle. The vocals sound a bit inhibited. Almost as if they were recorded at 3am in the morning and you didn't want to sing too loud for fear of waking anyone up.
But the melodies are great, as usual. They just need a bit more oophm to them. Big ups to you for doing your own vocals. Hopeless signers like myself have to rely on samples.
The only bit that doesn't quite fit for me is that reese bass. It almost sounds out of tune. I'd deffo think about replacing it with something smoother and chilled.
Beats are ok but they are too quiet and definitely lacking in oophm.
Overall tho, a good tune.
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ez mate - haha nice own vocals
so what do i think of ur singing? - yeah its not bad at all man! (although i don't like the "see" bit
) have u got pop killer with ur mic?, i'm one to talk i can't sing to save my life!
can't add anything else about the vocals than the guys have already said, maybe as a preference thing i would prefer those vocals processed a bit more (just me
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melodies are nice, the tune would definately benefit from beefing up, more energy, more punch would suite the vibe well i reckon
ezy dude, vocals are a bit weak, sounds like you recorded at night when every one was asleep. the vocal melody is good but not for this track i dont think either. the rest of the track is ok with some good points.