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BESHAI 
Beshai
Registration Date: 17-05-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Day Dreamer' and post your comments here!
OK so I haven't posted anything finished in well... never. would appreciate u guys taking a look back on some older tracks i posted in comparison to this track. not sure if i want to say this is complete at the moment but would love to hear your thoughts.
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18-10-2008 00:33 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Sounds close to the style of Camo.
Drums are a bit weak, layer some more smashy ones. Or better, layer a break.
Good melodies, superb pianowork. Needs a breakdown and some variation on the drums (which is great in the intro).
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18-10-2008 01:14 |
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mjbedlam
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Registration Date: 06-04-2008
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Quite pleasantly surprised,thought it was gonna be shit after the first bar.Sounds like it could be a decent liquid/hospital type of tune with a little bit added.Heard much worse!
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18-10-2008 03:12 |
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Tomos
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Sounds a bit sparse at the moment but it's still very pleasant. With a more edgy sound, more oophm and rollyness in the beat and thicker melodies, this could be brilliant.
The sound quality is very clear throughout and the whole thing is EQed very nicely. Like I said tho, it could sound more edgy. Perhaps you could try putting a distortion plugin on the master channel (but set to a very low level!), just to lift the mids a bit and bring out the highs.
Love the melodies. A change-up somewhere near the middle of the tune would be good tho. There's a danger that the tune becomes stale if the same type of melodies are played from start to finish.
Nice work, I enjoyed this one.
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18-10-2008 10:26 |
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wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
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try ohmicide vst...crazy distortion...review later
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20-10-2008 17:21 |
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the moneyshot
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Registration Date: 31-12-2007
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this sounds really good..........so far.drums are good, sub is really good. it sounds very commercial hope you dont mind me sayin that!!
i reckon a nice strong vocal would go well in this tune.
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27-10-2008 09:25 |
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