Intro is a bit too long. The tune seems to go to the breakdown from the intro. Needs a more banging part.
Good choice of sounds. Good eqing, good stereo!
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Like Battle said, there's some good stereo panning here. The tune takes a while to build up and once it gets past the first intro bit it still takes too long to build up into a potentional drop. What you've got so far, melody wise, is pretty good. It just need more action and to be condensed a bit. EQing isn't too bad but there's some distortion and clipping on your beats which you might want to look at.
Btw, it would be better if you could say something about your tune in the intro box, such as what program and plugins you used and what areas (such as EQing, beats, structure) you want people to focus on the most with their comments.
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sounds crisp, i like that little synth in the intro, really like tht little melody
yeah think you could generate more interest in the intro with more sounds, or cut it short as has already been suggested.
vocal is cool
fits the vibe (nudge nudge wink wink)
so yeah once ur in around 2:20 it defo needs more elemts, maybe a rise of some sorts to lead up to the drop - oh wait it finished
more please!!
beats are pretty generic and dont stand out. that vocal is a good choice but id of pitched it up slightly and tried to cover it up a bit. if ya get me!!
i dont really like that synth/guitar or what ever it is either.
fits the vibe (nudge nudge wink wink) 
more please!! 
