Pytchlocka
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Registration Date: 25-07-2008
Posts: 146
Please check out my new track 'Soliloquy' and post your comments here!
Minimalistic biznizz goin on here. Btw, I thought it was time to say [lol]:
I use Logic 8
On this particular track I used:
-Battery 3 Drums
-Addictive Drums
-Trilogy [Spectrasonics] Bass
-Guitar Rig [Native Instruments] Distortions
-Absynth Bass
-Pitch Shifter II
Maaaan, I'm into this, it's got a really original vibe going on. Those little vocal stabby things remind me of early LFO stuff for some reason. Loving the drumwork and the snares are really sharp and crisp. Really Got my head nodding. Be cool to hear the final to see how it progresses.
Yeah, really quite original!
Nice work on the intro at the start, loses it's way though. Where you have the bits with silence, they need something to bleed into the silence i think, like some reverb, or maybe some sub that doesn't go away when the rest does. The panning during the intro works well at first, but becomes a bit of overkill the longer it goes for, the bit reduction ont he weird sample thing needs some work on the automation, or something in the silence to carry it on. The Drop is ok but the beat is to sparse and the kick has no impact. Try adding more highs, and layer both your kick and snare. I like the beat programming and the idea are nice but i think it needs more work.
Keep up the originality and your production skills will come through!
A lot of the stuff you've posted lately hasn't been my style, but I'm feeling this one.
Nice minimal intro and I love the panning on the synth.
Nice glitch noises especially on the breakdown.
I think a heavier drop would work better and then take a few elements away after... I'm not used to this style though so if you feel that fewer elements work, then go for it. I think that the beat could be a little punchier.
Nice cymbal sounds especially, good sequencing.
The sounds got a little repetitive after a while, a slower pad or some overall arc could keep the tune progressing, or alternatively a new bass lead.
Good work overall here, this is a big improvement over some of your earlier work IMO.
I'd agree with cheezdotville that the kick needs a little more impact. Snare sounds good to me, a little bit more rhythmic variation would make this for me.
I like this track, not my style at all but I'm feeling it!
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hi mate, cool distortion i can hear that guitar rig workin, beats are nice. snare could hit a bit harder i reckon maybe just needs pushing up slightly.
Nice work on the intro at the start, loses it's way though. Where you have the bits with silence, they need something to bleed into the silence i think, like some reverb, or maybe some sub that doesn't go away when the rest does. The panning during the intro works well at first, but becomes a bit of overkill the longer it goes for, the bit reduction ont he weird sample thing needs some work on the automation, or something in the silence to carry it on. The Drop is ok but the beat is to sparse and the kick has no impact. Try adding more highs, and layer both your kick and snare. I like the beat programming and the idea are nice but i think it needs more work. 
