 stiffer - Night And Day |
stiffer
Producer
Registration Date: 06-10-2007
Posts: 60
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Please check out my new track 'Night And Day' and post your comments here!
a kinda liquidy tune, made in cubase..
not totally finished so would like constructive criticism..
enjoy!
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04-10-2008 14:26 |
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DJ ANARKY
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LUV D INTRO-PHAT!SPECIALLY DA VOCAL-GOOD BUILD-UP AND HEVVY DROP IN2 D BASSLINE.DA BEAT IS NICE BUT PERSONALLY THINK THE SNARE SPECIALLY CUD DO WIV TOUCH MORE SNAP BUT PART FROM DAT OVERALL-PHAT TUNE!
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04-10-2008 15:31 |
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Gregg 
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 16-05-2007
Posts: 417
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You’re snare is quite harsh sounding, what’s not a bad thing, though I think it’s a bit too much using it more then 2 times per bar. So use it less in your drum loop and go for more neutral ghost snare or something. Got me?
Melody could use a tad more variation, maybe every 8 bars a different note.
The wobble bass you got sounds nice, could be even more obvious (add some more texture…).
Overall production is good sounds clean.
Interesting track.
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04-10-2008 16:17 |
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g2theross
G2theross
Registration Date: 04-10-2008
Posts: 24
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i liked the intro but and throughout the breakdown i thought the track held promise but the drop was a little uninteresting and the drums sound a little harsh. The drum structure sounds ok though so i would imagine with some tweaking a cool track is underlying.
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06-10-2008 06:31 |
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the moneyshot
str8 outa nocash
Registration Date: 31-12-2007
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ez m8, the synth or sample you got reapeting all the way thru needs to go imo, it just gets really annoying. drums could do with more substance to them maybe a couple more layers of breaks or some cymbals. bass sounds nice but needs bringing up i reckon. structure is good.
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08-10-2008 08:41 |
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