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Patlabor Patlabor is a female
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Please check out my new track 'Lightlike' and post your comments here!


16 years= way to much time on hands:p
Really enjoy doing this!
- made in FL

i hope you like it *feedback please

love

This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by Patlabor: 03-10-2008 22:36.

03-10-2008 21:52
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Naassty!
Drums roll very nicely. I think you could probably boost the bass levels more though.
The atmospheric stuff before and after the second drop is excellent, really fits with the tune.
Very very well done imo.
04-10-2008 05:30
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Really nice stuff, this has tonnes of potential. I love the heaviness of the beats and the huge bassline. Melodies are wicked too.

Actually tho, I think you need to tone some of this down because it's a little messy right now. There's some weird panning (too many things going in different directions), and the bass needs to lose some of it's low frequencies I feel. Also, I think it conflicts with the kick quite a lot. They seem to fight each other at certain points.

The other synth sounds are very nice indeed, great melodies. Again, some of them are a little too noisy and overbearing. That's something this mix suffers from - there's too many elements at the same volume level. Too many dominant elements are competing against each other and causing the whole thing to sound crowded.

But as a tune, this is super good. I'm on my 5th listen. Big Grin Looking forward to more tunes from you.

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04-10-2008 10:29 Homepage of Tomos
Patlabor Patlabor is a female
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hey, thanks alot!- i will try to work on some velocity and
i totally agree that its too messy , will try and work on making
it less messy.

thanks for positive feedback ,, appreciate it!
04-10-2008 19:25
cynik cynik is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by Patlabor
16 years= way to much time on hands:p


you were making this 16 years?? lol only joking

IMO premature drop

what follows is pretty good tho. bassline is nasty. IMO you can improve on the transition parts, sounds just die away before it all comes back. some beat changes would be nice with the already nice moving bass

not bad

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Astrocyte Astrocyte is a male
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Loving the drums man, good driving feel there.
Levels a bit odd on the synths, they feel a little muddled.
Wicked track though! Good atmosphere to it.

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05-10-2008 15:10
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