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DJ ANARKY
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Please check out my new track 'Ye' and post your comments here!
MADE THIS ON FRUITY LOOPS BOUT 6MONTHS AGO AN THINK ITS MUCH BETTER THAN 'CU DA BASS'WICH I UPLOADED RECENTLY SO NE FEEDBAK/COMMENTS/CRITICISM VERY MUCH WELCOME AS AM TRYIN 2 GET BETTER
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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03-10-2008 20:50 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
Posts: 6,413
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You are right about this one being better than the first tune you uploaded. In fact it is even pretty good. A little bit on the repetitive side, could be improved by adding some pads, FX glitches, vocal bits,... Classic bassline!
Stay with FL and forget Cubase 
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03-10-2008 21:30 |
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Patlabor
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Registration Date: 07-04-2007
Posts: 51
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hey!,, especially like the liquid stuff at the end.
nice beat and like the varations-
ye could add a bit more elements to make it sound fuller, bit more melody or something like that -just an idea
but nothing bad to say really, nice clean production
keep up!
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03-10-2008 22:24 |
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Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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This one is definitely much better than your previous tune. Much clearer structure, much crisper beats, more melody (even tho a lot of it consists of samples... but we'll let you off with that at this stage
), and overall a much better sounding mix. It's actually pretty good. The only thing I would suggest with this would be to drop the David Carbone samples, or at least mash them up and make them your own. Every producer comes across those samples so they'll know where they came from. I would start working on your synths and melodies because that seems to be lacking from both your tunes. But overall, this is a good effort. Keep hammering away at it and keep improving bro. 
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04-10-2008 10:41 |
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cynik
Cp6uja
Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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not much of an intro
those beats don't change and not much new going on when you drop the intro synth so the drop is non existant
the beat itself gets boring pretty soon imo
some smart transitions later on, nice movement of the bass
not much of a theme, after it stopped I forgot it already
keep workin
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05-10-2008 13:27 |
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