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Travis_Huckins Travis_Huckins is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Nanobot Infection' and post your comments here!


I greatly edited this song. I also found out that it does follow a scale. So it has a key. I uploaded this to another site that would have told me that it was of key but it isn't. I think that it isn't anyway. I am trying to learn music theory on my own but most examples are confusing to me. I did find something called scale tool to help me with staying in a scale to stay on key.

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Travis_Huckins: 02-10-2008 03:36.

02-10-2008 02:10 Homepage of Travis_Huckins
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Pretty good but the main synth isn't heavy enough imo. It doesn't have enough bite and roughness. I'd layer it with a saw wave and some distortion. Or a reese and distortion.

Beat patterns fit the melodies well, although they are quite basic. Deffo sounds more like rock beats, than dnb (no bad thing).

A vocal or two during the main parts would sound good in this.

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02-10-2008 19:46 Homepage of Tomos
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I NO ABSOLUTELY NUFFIN BOUT WETHER A TUNE IS IN KEY OR NOT, HAVE NOT BIN PRODUCIN 4 DAT LONG BUT I LIKE TO FINK I CAN TEL BY EAR N DIS SOUNDS OK 2 ME.NEWAYS BOUT DA TUNE-FINK ITS A SWEET INTROWITH DA SYNTHY SOUNDS AN DRUMS, DIDINT THINK DA DROP WAS THE BESTDIDINT SEEM TO KIK IN WIV A GREAT DEAL OF UMPH BUT 2 B FAIR I CUD ONLY LISEN TO DIS THROUGH HEADPHONES SO AS U NO CUDNT GET A PROPER PROPER FEEL 4 DA TRACK. I REALLY LIKE THE BEAT UV MADE 4 THIS- QUITE LIVELY N KIKIN-BEST BIT 4 ME IS DA SNARE ON I THINK EVRY 4 BARS.OVERALL PRETTY GOOD TRAK THO MATE,HOW LONG U BIN MAKIN TUNES? SAFE SAFE DJ ANARKY
02-10-2008 21:54
Travis_Huckins Travis_Huckins is a male
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Thanks but don't post in all caps it is hard to read like that.

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02-10-2008 22:36 Homepage of Travis_Huckins
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not keen on the drums used in the intro, the pad used could be made wider, more full by using some chorus and/or reverbs

it all picks up a bit later on, some cheeky drum editing and tasty sounding bass-lead whihch btw can be made louder/sharper

by this point the drums are not enough, some breaks layers perhaps?

not really sure on the trancey synth thing but it doesnt get in the way

1:47 half step really kills all the momentum potential. can go without it

not a bad tune which would benefit of a few tweaks

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03-10-2008 08:59 Homepage of cynik
Sephiroth Sephiroth is a male
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pad in the intro sounds a little bear, maybe a layered pad playing the same notes a semitone lower would beef em up...drums could use more bite and energy to em, sound a little weak at the mo, more mid layers, main kick and snare stand out well tho....some nice fx and atmos throughout give a moody feel, vocoder part works well too....not keen on a few of the drum edits tbh, dont flow very well....structure and arrangment isnt too bad but could be worked on a bit....i reckon the main bass could use a bit of boosting too to give a bit more edge, sub is nice and deep tho, keeps the low end flowing.....not a bad track overall, really needs more energy tho...

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12-10-2008 14:44 Homepage of Sephiroth
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