yeah man them drums need beefin up!! get your self a couple of breaks and layer them in. some cymbals or percussion. use ghost snares and ghost kiks, anything to fatten the sound of your drums. bass melody is good and catchy maybe needs a mid range synth in there with it aswell tho.
Man, those drums sound like my Grandad's old Casio keyboard in meltdown :-)
Seriously though, nothing wrong with the rhythm, just please give them some life!
Other than the drums I like the track overall, it has an quite an edgy, almost spacey feel to it.
Some great FX in there - very dark and a little scary!
Can't help but think there's something missing in there though - it needs *something* to break it up. Some kind of eerie lead synth complementing the bassline perhaps?
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