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cheezdotville cheezdotville is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Cheezdotville And Benx - Unfinished' and post your comments here!


Heres a preview of a song Benx and i are working on. Looking for general feedback, but focusing on bassline and sound suitablity (if that makes any sense).

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29-09-2008 04:20 Homepage of cheezdotville
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29-09-2008 04:24 Homepage of cheezdotville
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Bassdrum needs more bang (around 90-100Hz) to push through that mean bassline. Snare sounds a bit weird after 0:33", I can clearly hear the layering of the sounds you used, the snare itself sounds a bit wimpy, needs more power.
Not in love with the pads from the intro, might sound better with a tweak or even a different sound.
This has potential, but I would have liked it if the intro was left out and you would have demonstrated more bass work instead.

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29-09-2008 11:54 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Hey everyone, would love some feedback!! Big Grin

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29-09-2008 11:56 Homepage of dip_registered
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EZ

Not sure bout the break in the 1st part of the intro - seems at bit pointless to me, maybe give it a bit of filter automation or something to generate a bit of movement and interest. Nice atmospherics though

Cool groove once it drops, diggin the bass work

beat programmin is good, snare a bit high pitched n fizzy for my liking

Good stuff generally

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29-09-2008 13:30 Homepage of Binary Havoc
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thanks all for feedback.

Intro going to be reworked!

Stay tuned. =D
30-09-2008 07:46 Homepage of cheezdotville
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main part sound muffled maybe cut some more low end off that bass. and do the same with the kik cause it is way to boomey.
once you sort them out and eq it, i reck that main part will be great.
30-09-2008 09:35
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I'm not entirely sure if the intro matches the rest of the track.
I like the sound (the background pad) but it doesn't seem to marry up with the beats.
Also, I think the beats need a bit more... oomph?
I like the rhythm it's just it seems it could do with maybe a little distortion on the kick+snare or something?
The bassline, however, I love. I think perhaps that it's too phat for the beats at the moment! (see previous point)

[ I can't comment on any EQ issues with the speakers I'm listening on!!!]

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30-09-2008 11:17
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ez guys Big Grin beat in the intro is ok for me, could use more movement definately

like the filtered bass, nice n twisted boys haha and feelin the change ups, nice im listening i think u could make the intro darker to build the tension for that drop

get some more layers on the beat, that one break sounds a bit looped.

all said really like the direction this is heading in - make sure u let us hear the finished version! Bigup

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01-10-2008 20:30 Homepage of Ketz
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