drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » philbee - Ode To The Wize philbee - Ode To The Wize Author Post philbee Future beats for the streets Registration Date: 18-10-2006 Posts: 483 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Ode To The Wize' and post your comments here! ez peeps, long time no see!! as usual real life getting in the way of producing! got home from a hard day at work and started a track so i thought id whack it up for you guyz to check out,about 5 hours work , anywayz feel free to heap praise/slag off big upz to all my dotbe family peace and one love philbee __ Philbee Soundcloud 29-09-2008 00:08 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  There's not enough difference between the main part and the intro. Intro needs tension building. The breakdown comes way too early. Mixdown sounds a bit messy, the mids of the drums could be more upfront. Needs more elements to add that sick bit of tension. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 29-09-2008 11:32 the moneyshot str8 outa nocash Registration Date: 31-12-2007 Posts: 328 Helpfulness rating:  it sounds good but needs more variation. all the sounds fit well together. i love the grunting bass (if thats what its called?) gives it real attitude. 30-09-2008 09:13 Ketz Thinking outside the box... Registration Date: 10-10-2007 Posts: 2,865 Helpfulness rating:  hello mr philbee nice to hear sumthin from ya! cool beat, hey 5 hours work, i would normally take 5 days to acheive the same results lol bass is wicked really got that to growl - boh! mate i think if u tidied this one up would sound really heavy! so suggestions would be sort the mixdown out, im sure all the elements will fit together better with some eq work, a few beat variations here n there and a couple switch ups on the bass and job done! wicked stuff overall __ 01-10-2008 20:21 Wally D Cool Steppa Registration Date: 02-06-2008 Posts: 162 Helpfulness rating:  Like the drums and the overall feel of the track.The bassline is doing something I can't put my finger on.Mabey not enough attack on the sub end of it. Cool track though __ http://www.chemical-records.co.uk/store/Infinite-Recordings http://soundcloud.com/wallyd79 AIM wallyd79 02-10-2008 19:30 Tomos Infidel Registration Date: 15-04-2007 Posts: 2,276 Helpfulness rating:  Long time no see! Good build-up. A decent amount of energy and good use of effects as per (where do you get them all from?). The only criticism here would be that it sounds a bit thin, especially the beats. Bassline is good. Sounds a bit bitty to me tho, might need beefing up/layering. Also, I'd layer-up the beats when it drops cos like Battle said, there isn't enough variation in the beats between the intro and the drop. Needs a few more elements for sure, but for 5 hours works, this is definately a good start. Nice work kid. __ MySpace | Soundcloud | Drumnbass.be | Facebook "It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan 02-10-2008 20:31 Vectrex Benzin Registration Date: 05-02-2008 Posts: 118 Helpfulness rating:  Sick neuro bassline! not so keen on the snare sound (maybe the snare is a bit to loud in the mix). Also I would try to give the drum a bit more variation. Overall very nice work! __ Vectrex on Soundcloud Vectrex on Facebook 03-10-2008 13:32 brucifer Making all the tunes your mum loves Registration Date: 23-10-2007 Posts: 997 Helpfulness rating:  Nice mate. Like this style. Only thing, but it might be my set, ya bass is killing ya beats. I reckon the beats could be a little thicker. __ 12-10-2008 22:50 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » philbee - Ode To The Wize