 DJ BZ - ACCEPT IT!! (PREVIEW)  |
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Steppa
Registration Date: 31-01-2004
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nice intro. don't like those 'pad' sounds really. the drums are tight, but some compression would make them real real tight. if you made those drums yourself nice work then. those looping pads should be changed into strings or something like that they get boring and sound cheesy.
okay then the mid section. that climax thing at 00:53 with the kicks is nice but i wish you ended that with a big snare hit, like dook-dook-dook-dook-TAAK you know? then the bass sound. it seems panned to the right. the sound itself is okay but you should filter it more, add reverb, compress it, put some fxs on it ya know? dunno bout the bassline tune, it sounds clownsteppy. dont like clownstep. 
but the composition itself of the song is allright. just put more technique to it. good luck.
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25-02-2004 14:11 |
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Surya 
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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The reece sounds very standard sawtooth, a bit dull. Layer and distort is my message 
Drums are nice but don't have the power needed for a track like this. The beak is very standard too.
The sub is too quiet, boost it to make the track sound more ballanced.
The melody is quite allright, but the track becomes boring after quite a short time, so more elements are needed.
Vocal is a bit overused, especially in the beginning
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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