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str8 outa nocash


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Please check out my new track 'Super Hero (unfinished)' and post your comments here!

Unfinished again, i will have too finish summit oneday.
had to mix it down last night with my newborn son in bed so had to have the volume really low, so not sure if the sub is overpowering the track.

used cubase, massive, vb1, and camel phat.

let me know what you think.


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23-09-2008 08:55
Binary Havoc Binary Havoc is a male
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Hey man

Gotta say I wasn't enjoying this in the intro, that high pitched reverse sound cuts like a knife man, vocal sample is unclear too

But after the drop I thought it got loads better. Sub definately sounds a bit overpowering to me as you said but the synth melodies are good, the right side of jump up for me and I thought it had a strong groove

Maybe a bit repetitive towards the end but as you said, its unfinished so anyway

Enjoyed

Nice one

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23-09-2008 19:15 Homepage of Binary Havoc
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Tune has potential as good old jump up, but the main part is a bit on the repetitive side, could do with some hook to hold the attention of the listener. The stuff that gets introduced around 2:30 is a huge improvement, but when you go in the "Taxman and co" direction you should have lots of weird synths like that to keep it going. Needs wicked vocal stabs, weird fx and every 8th bar or so some drum variation.

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24-09-2008 21:15 Homepage of BattleDrone
Ketz Ketz is a male
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hello mate, wow that reverse sound is a bit harsh on the ears like BH said!

yeah nice drop!! now i'm feelin it! Big Grin Big Grin sub is big, maybe turn it down a tad and the synth bass could be brought forward a bit more (for me anyways lol), would love to hear some more modulation in there or just maybe the odd additional variation on it

could have a few more beat variations as well to keep it interesting

nice one man - defo enjoyed this one! Bigup

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26-09-2008 21:56 Homepage of Ketz
tryptech tryptech is a male
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Congrats with youuurr baby

clear mixdown, dont like that high sound, it sound little cheap in comparison too your onther sounds. Bass is nicee, deep, not too much sub
Niceee


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27-09-2008 13:22 Homepage of tryptech
the moneyshot the moneyshot is a male
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thankyou for your advice, im gonna scrap the intro altogether, and see what i can come up wiv.

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28-09-2008 08:33
Sundancer Sundancer is a male
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Hi there!

The drums sound pretty good, but the bassdrum is sort of pushed away. I can hear it's there but you have to bring it up a little bit.

The subbass is good, it is melodic, fits well. Try to work a bit on the balance between the subbass and the bassdrum.

The lead is okay, nice synth, but maybe a bit repetitive. At least for a home listener. But at a party I don't think this would be a problem. Specially if I'm drunk Smile

The structure is also good enough, nice buildup.

Overall, this is a decent track.

Sundancer.

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28-09-2008 12:54 Homepage of Sundancer
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