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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Quite nice intro.
Like that snare a lot, totally my style! Pitch it a little lower though, and a tad more reverb, would be sweet
2.20: we're really in for a change now, but you just keep going -> takes too long with the same stuff.
3.25: finally he have a bassline. Good, but a minute late imo.
I guess you wanted a long and simple progressive track, but this is just a bit too long imo.
Nice concept, but it needs more work imo
2.5/5
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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Surora23
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Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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intro is cool...i like the acid sound synth...lvoe the hi-hats you got going...i like a lot of percussion...love the kick and snare...breaks are really good...the vocal is good too...the only thing i was upset about is that it was so repetive, and the sub was fairly minimal, or atleast i couldnt hear anything...you add a big break down...and add a big middle to it...i think it needs some work...but as for what it is, its a damn good start...
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Surya
The Robot

Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice to see people responding to those frontpage messages
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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19-07-2004 10:53 |
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