The first 1:30 is quite boring because very little happens, it needs to build a bit more tension.
The whole mix seems to lack low end.
Especially the snare and the hihats sound cut off towards the low end.
The bass lacks sub/low end. It is very clear that you played the bass with a sample whereas in this style of bass (Noisia and co) it is quite typical that the bassline sounds like filter-busy flanging jelly which is the stuff most people like about it.
The track simply seems to restart and play the same stuff again. It would be good to add new elements or change the arrangment to keep things more interesting.
Not bad at all, make sure you have low end, take care of the basslines, keep the arrangment interesting...
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ez mate. not bad overall, for me i would like to hear more prominent shuffles when the beat is playin, bass like BD said could do with more low end, pump the sub up a bit
on the synth bass you got some nice lil variations but for me they're not cohesive enough as one melody / hook, its a tad random (i know its hard to get the various bits to gel together trust me i have the same problem), so my only advice would be to keep making all teh crazy edits and try select some that work better together
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Ketz: 20-09-2008 11:46.
the drums sound tight and there is some good bass melodys in there but i would change the padz and i would cut them dead after the drop, to have them playing in the main verse dosnt work imo.