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carmod 
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Registration Date: 04-07-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Caeli Vir' and post your comments here!
just a taster of the intro cos the rest is still in my head
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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12-09-2008 00:11 |
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Tomos
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Excellent stuff so far. Still a little early to make a proper assessment, but I'm definitely feeling those beats. The edits are top notch. Good sound too. The only bit I don't like is the very first few bars with the hi hats. They sound a bit amateurish and flat, imo. But yeah, good solid start. Keep it going.
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12-09-2008 21:47 |
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c_ctrl
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ooh, Where you gonna take it from here? Sounding good so far, but I'd agree with Tomos and either get rid of the hats in the opening bars, leave them beatless or get the beat going from the off. Interesting work, but too early to say more.
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12-09-2008 23:38 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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The EQing of your break needs attention, it sounds pretty low passed and the break itself sounds a bit low-fi (especially the ride).
Looking forward to the tune because there isn't much going on right now.
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12-09-2008 23:57 |
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Binary Havoc
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13-09-2008 17:19 |
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Timmi
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Registration Date: 04-11-2007
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nice ambient sounds u got in the background, kinda thing i do 4 my intros. nice drum edits, i understand what u wer tryin to do but sometimes it seemed a bit random, jus maybe rethink a few of the rhythms, but keep the offbeat style. something to work on 4 def. nice 1.
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15-09-2008 02:24 |
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Phalanx
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Registration Date: 13-09-2007
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Hi,
Sounds promising so far. As Battledrone said, the beat EQ could use a bit of work. As it is everything sounds a bit bare without enough cover over the frequency range.
Drum edits are nice but I would re-check the pattern from 0:16-19, it sounds like it ends a little too late and the overall flow of the drum pattern is being interrupted.
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16-09-2008 15:51 |
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