Please check out my new track 'Never Known Fear' and post your comments here!
I made this one a year ago and i decided to remake it. This is the new version straight out from reason. Needs mastering yet but before that i want to know your opinions about it. So comments are appreciated
ez Krisch
nice to see u finally uploaded a tune after so long!
i like the ideas in the intro, cool vibe think maybe a little more fx and some reverb there? to make it gel better
yeah the beat needs some more layers, the hats are a bit "snappy" for my liking so really get another break in there to fill it out a bit more, snare could do with some more body to it and kick can thump more i think
the crazy synth i can tell is you
i reckon that needs boosting on the low mids or even layer another synth underneath it and maybe some filter work there
quite original this in terms of musicality
always nice to go back to old tunes and rework em, i try but at times the prjects are too much of a mess!
so i guess my only other suggestion would be to get some fx etc in to help flow between transitions of melodies and ideas more. nice overall get it finished - big ups!
It sounds like a game soundtrack, that means it is meant to support some other action going on, it doesn't grab you by the balls and bang you onto the dancefloor like a good DnB tune should. The production sounds clean, well structured, good melodies and everything, but it's too nice and friendly imo. Check those slammers from TheAudioDemon to fully understand what I mean. They sound mean and dark without being hardstep.
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i like your intro. nice atmospherics and it builds up quite nicely. the snare sounds a bit out of the track. theres nothing wrong with the sample but i think it needs a slight eq to position it. i would turn the mid bass up at about 200hz and just slightly tone the treble down on it. just slightly. if that dosent work then try some tape compression on the scream to dirty it up a bit. and your whole break would sound great with a fast litte bongo percussion to fill the gaps between your kick and snare. other than that i like it! good job!
I thought the intro was excellent. The melodies work beautifully together. However, once it drops the tune looses impact because it lacks energy and some of the levels aren't quite right, imo. For instance, the lead synth is too dominant and the bass is too quiet. Yeah, like Battle said, the tune sounds like a soundtrack from a game (which isn't a bad thing). The EQing on the snare could do with some adjustment because it's too snappy and there's too much attack on it, imo. Overall, not a bad tune but coud be better. Deffo has potential.
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A little computer game sounding, but I definitely wouldn't be dissapointed if it turned up on a game I was playing. The snare is a little weird sounding and the beat a little empty and not really slamming enough. I like the synth work tho, it has a lot of depth on it, on my cans anyway. You got some nice pad work in there aswell.. atmosphere is great, especially in the intro. Good job.
Maybe I should to send this one to a few game developers
Anyway im still working on it, i hope im going on the right track.
Thank you for all your reviews.
Ez!
intro is nice and spacey...maybe more reverb or delay would make it more atmospheric, a few more fx too sweeping and gliding around.
some nice synth work as it builds up....build up in general all comes together nicely...drums could maybe bit a bit more frantic and energetic when sub bass comes in...loses impact slightly....synth needs boosting too to make it sound fuller...mix in general sounds a little empty...defo needs filling with mroe elements...decent tune overall tho, mixdown quite clear and defined, jus a bit empty...
nice work!