 theaudiodemon - Betrayed (dubstep) |
theaudiodemon
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 24-06-2007
Posts: 152
Helpfulness rating:
 |
|
Please check out my new track 'Betrayed (dubstep)' and post your comments here!
This is only my 2nd Dubstep project I've ever made, not often that I make it as I got more love for DnB (naturally) 
Anyway made using R4, kept it quite minimal with the beats as the synth(s) and b-lines do most of the work.
check it out, all comments and tips on future projects of Dubstep welcome!
Audio Demon
|
|
|
03-09-2008 15:05 |
|
|
CLARKFADER
unregistered
|
|
hi mate , like the idea , but the beat lets it down 4 me , u need to get it rolling(imo) , with more hat n shit , but as its your 2nd track , i`ll let u off , he he , !!! it all soundz too "minimal" , i think the track would benefit from some sweeping fxs and some reverbed snares , and if u notice in dubstep , alot of it is loads of delay and reverb to smooth it together !!
the track is far too long as well , as not much variation going on , but , i used to make loads of mistakes as well , so dont worry too much !!!!
|
|
|
03-09-2008 15:52 |
|
|
c_ctrl 
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 02-06-2008
Posts: 307
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
You've got the "step" part, now get the Dub in there, swim that shit in reverb and tape delay 
!! It al sounds a little too dry at the moment, but it's definitely getting there. I like the bass and that fizzy little wobble. I reckon just with some well placed effects in there and Maybe another layer of bass, then you'd see that the tune was just about finished! I like it a lot.
__
DeCode & Roary Soundcloud
|
|
|
03-09-2008 16:31 |
|
|
Kid Prodigy
DV8
Registration Date: 08-11-2005
Posts: 22
|
|
Ez There Audio Demon,
I Understand the minimalist style youve gone for, but i think that more range of drums and percussion could be used, trilling around all different frequencies. I think the set drum loop on its own sounds boring. Theres one individual clap nearer the end of each bar that really has its own different frequency and sits really nicely, Variation. On the upper hand the basses are standing out really well, and the melodies and structure are great. Its Good!
__
Kid Prodigy (
Production of pure dnb!
|
|
|
04-09-2008 01:26 |
|
|
BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
Posts: 6,413
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
Drums sound a bit like hiphop and the kick should have more impact. Main snare could do with some reverb. Love the basses!
Not bad for a beginners(in dubstep) project.
__
 Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
|
|
|
05-09-2008 08:52 |
|
|
CULTURE BOY
v v v iv a record missing
Registration Date: 12-01-2007
Posts: 1,415
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
kinda like the beats....... reverb needed on the snare. try add a few skippy grasshopper hats to make em roll more. bass sounds nice. bit of variation needed to keep it flowing.
nice effort tho bro!
__
www.myspace.com/cultureboydnb
soundcloud
|
|
|
05-09-2008 14:20 |
|
|
Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
Posts: 2,276
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
| quote: |
Originally posted by TheSentinel
and dubbed dubbe instead of dotbe ! |
__
MySpace | Soundcloud | Drumnbass.be | Facebook
"It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan
|
|
|
05-09-2008 21:47 |
|
|
Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
Posts: 2,276
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
Can't really say anything that hasn't said already. Deffo too dry but still very good. There's a decent amount of groove there which is essential in dubstep. Like c_ctrl said tho, it's lacking the 'dub' aspect to dubstep. Get busy on the reverb and delay! Good stuff mate.
__
MySpace | Soundcloud | Drumnbass.be | Facebook
"It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan
|
|
|
05-09-2008 21:50 |
|
|
Timmi
Atmos T (aka Timmi)
Registration Date: 04-11-2007
Posts: 207
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
not sure if its original but got me hed noddin! nice1.
__
www.myspace.com/atmostuk
Atmos T - You See Me EP Out now 4 free download
** http://www.sendspace.com/file/6q3frj **
|
|
|
09-09-2008 01:57 |
|
|
|
