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carmod 
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Registration Date: 04-07-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Nameless(unfinished)' and post your comments here!
so this is far from being finished but its the first track of mine i actually think is ok. bita constructive criticism would be nice!
lemme know wat ya think
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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02-09-2008 21:26 |
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the moneyshot
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Registration Date: 31-12-2007
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first off mate you need to remove that anoyin vocal you got goin there. it just gets in the way of every thing else. or you could chop it up and mangle it a bit , it just gets really repetative.
the structure of the drums isnt to bad but again not enough variation in them.the synth sounds not to bad and runs nice with the melody,good try dude keep it up.
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03-09-2008 15:06 |
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sam beckett
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Registration Date: 03-09-2008
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this is to repetative you need to mix it up a lot.
the sythny vocals you got goin on are to loud and use them all the way thru with out any change. and im sure they go out off time at some point. drums are weak and clutterd you need to eq them to get some seperation in there.
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03-09-2008 16:19 |
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c_ctrl
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Registration Date: 02-06-2008
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I think the key to getting this track on the right track would be to definitely get some variation in there. The vocal effect could be used well in moderation but not al the way throughout the tune. The drums lack a little punch, theyre a bit too white noise-y for my liking. It could do with a crisp break or some ghosts in thereto add a little groove. The synths are a bit to intrusive, for them to work I think they need to sit a little further back in the mix and then maybe theyll be alright. Overall I'd say work on variation and getting a crisp mix so its punchy and effective. Has potential, keep going mate.
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03-09-2008 16:26 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Yeah it does need some variation but I do like the melody in this. The trouble is, it just doesn't change. How did you get that vocoder-like effect on it? It sounds good. Beats are ok but need boosting cos they are a bit thin atm. They don't punch through the mix enough. Also, tone down some of the layers once it drops cos there's too many competing sounds. It gets a bit muddy at around 1.26. Overall, not bad.
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05-09-2008 21:44 |
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BESHAI
Beshai
Registration Date: 17-05-2008
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i agree use teh vocal sample here and there . maybe some different effects on it as well.
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06-09-2008 14:02 |
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Timmi
Atmos T (aka Timmi)
Registration Date: 04-11-2007
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that vocoder sound reminds me off a track of the 1st pendulum album, i kinda see what u tried to do ere. I think u jus need a dirty bassline underneath to make it work, maybe rethink the mix aswell cus the drums seemed a bit weak, but i am listening on sum shit hedfones at the mo so that might be part of it lol. nice 1.
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09-09-2008 02:06 |
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