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my first post on this site for months now as i have been working on a differant genre. not finished and not really mixed to well. im not crazy about the bass line can you suggest a different sound maybe?
and after the drop it feels a bit empty any suggestions on that aswell.
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Str8 away the track sounds really pro, Nice drums everything sits really well and the vocals niiice. I think the bass needs to be alot warmer and full. If it isnt already maybe split up the bass so there is a stand alone SUB underneath everything, Following the same or a similar pattern, at least to fill the gaps where theres no bass, and still have the highs floating around on top. Introducing more Rides always fills out the top end in my opinion you cant go wrong with em. Sweet idea and concept, really original, Really Good Stuff in my opinion
Overall, pretty good. Tight production techniques. The vocals are definitely the highlight of the tune, they work excellently with the other melodies. Bassline isn't too bad. It kinda takes a back seat in this tune because the vocals are so dominant (in a good way). Where did you get the vocals from? You should mention it in the tune description.
Beats are solid and tight. Well EQed.
I like it, good tune.
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thanx for the reviews guys, i was startin to give up. nice to see some positive feedback for once, but then again if i neva got the negative reviews i prolly wouldnt of tried so hard.
really like the sounds in the intro, beat is really nice, eq's good like the boys have said
and yes that vocal is sweet, really livens things up, wicked emotions building love that vibe - hey is that an indian vocal?! oh yes it is, now i recognise it man, i love using indian vocals in my tunes, done a couple myslef!
my only suggestion would be to get a bit more emphasis on the bass, still really nice piece of music here mate
everything is sounding tight as!
Like the dark intro
I might have waited another 8 bars in the intro
Like the vocals
The synth needs a little cleaning
The drop was alright
Not feeling the bassline too much
Sounds very good! The vocals are sweet and the edits are cool. I like the drum sound you got but the snare roll at the end of every 8 bars (? =S) in the mid section was really grating on me. Bassline could use a little cleaning up, its alright at the moment but could be better. Nice work on the "pad stabs" they're cool too.
wikid vocal sample wherever u got that from, sounds like off some epic bollywood film or something. Intro and the drop was spot on, wasnt feelin the sounds for the bass tho, which dissapointed me after it was soundin really unique. u jus need to scrap that bass sound an work on a new 1 like u sed. Def work on this. got potential. nice1.
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time to get out the almighty MASSIVE i think
Give 'em hell son.
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not bad bro... I see where you're going with it...
I would say, maybe bring up the break layers in the drums so that the kick and the snare are still pronounced but so that it sounds more full maybe... and as far as your bassline... I would say tweek with the filter frequency so that that it's more noticeable, a bit louder, then kill the low end and make a seperate sub layer and then side chain to the kick so that the kick and pass through the sub nicely and have a full sound... but yeah man, you're "dressing" of the soung (as battledrone would put it) is dope, it's not a bad tune, just needs a little work.
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You know what type of bass line i feel on this one?? A heavy reggae bass line 4 real. One right out of the eighties, not the present date i.e one of them tenor saw bass lines or nitty gritty hits using atleast three/four keys of your midi keyboard right on 0.35, but i like the voice sample and the pads... respect. you can do alot with this tune, i.e a few sound clash samples etc, lick shots and what not if you want to take it that way....peace...
everything is sounding tight as!
