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Pytchlocka 
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Please check out my new track 'Wrm - The Unwanted » [pytchlocka Remix]' and post your comments here!
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30-08-2008 15:58 |
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Gregg
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Intro is good, nice melodies.
The part after the drop is not fitting to the intro and could be just split up to another song.
I see, it will be quite hard to have the heavy bass you got there playing with the orch but you gotta figure out a way.
You could start with the orch and a sub, then filter in the recee, drop the orch and sub…filter out recce, bring other elements back… whatever you like just make both parts refer to each other in a way.
The overall production is clean, but your bassline sounds a bit dry and your kick doesn’t really kick or even stand out a bit. I’d go for a less rockish sounding snare as well.
This tune has potential but needs some work.
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31-08-2008 20:35 |
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Pytchlocka
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Yah- I know dude. i just put it together very quik...didn't really work much on it...not too worried about it much anyway atm i'm working on my own tunes. but yeah I definitely feel what you're saying. Drums need work, and I'm gonna try and follow what Wrm did on hiss drop and bring in the strings and whatnot. Thx for the feedback anyway!
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01-09-2008 01:28 |
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[dj] Leonces
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Nice intro - is that an orchestral sample or do you have software? That sounds really good. That bass is wicked man! disgusting! filthy! in poor taste! I love it!
Same deal with your last tune (that I just reviewed) - Beat needs a little more kick - assness to compete with that bassline. I'd layer anothe kick and snare - give the kicks an eq boost around 80 - 100 hz and the snares a boost closer to 150 - 200 hz. Then add some compression with low ratio - like 3:1, instant attack, and low release. It'll make the beat pop a little more.
Dude what did you do to that bass!!! Sounds like Dieselboy!
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01-09-2008 04:40 |
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Muad'Dib
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you should've added that this is a preview and not the full tune.
Nice tune, overall. 
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01-09-2008 10:38 |
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Pytchlocka
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LOL I DID! BAHAHAHAH 
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01-09-2008 18:23 |
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Sephiroth
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fuck me that intro sounds epic....bass is sick, maybe a better transistion from epic orchestra into filthy bass tho? drop is a bit dissapoiting tbh after the imense build up....drums lack enough roll to make the drop exciting and quick....got potential to be an absolute stonker this...beef up the sub too a tad i reckon...sort out the drums man and this tune could be really, really good.
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01-09-2008 19:52 |
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Tomos
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Huge vibes in the intro. Beautiful string melodies.
Well EQed too. I kinda like the drop too, although I don't think it gels with the intro very well. It's just too different and mental. 
But I love the bass sounds you get. I'm listening to this on headphones and there appears to be some strange panning with the bass? Sounds weird - I'd deffo keep it centred. Basslines are usually heavier when they are centred. Beats are good but they need a tad more beef.
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01-09-2008 20:16 |
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