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DJ BZ 
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Registration Date: 07-11-2003
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled' and post your comments here!
ez guys,
just working on this at the mo, not finished it yet, looking for some feedback and some suggestions.
big up
bz
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29-08-2008 01:34 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Kick isn't as punchy as the snare, could use a tad more. Very dancefloor oriented things going on here, but it changes a bit too much for that task I think and it needs a clear hook.
Mastering and eQing sound top notch!
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29-08-2008 13:51 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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This isn't my bag I'm afraid. The only section I like is from 2.01 to 2.22. That section has massive potential imo my opinion. That has my head bobbin for sure. But I'm not feelin the other sections. Like Battle said, it's well EQed. Maybe it sounds a bit too clean tho (apart from the bassline, which sounds great)? I'd deffo add some distortion or grittyness on the beats to make it sound rougher, more edgy.
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29-08-2008 19:16 |
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Sephiroth
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nice atmospheric intro....kick and snare sound great...really punchy...amen sounds a little out of place....structure is a little basic imo, not much automation or movement, jus things droppping in and out...bass is too distant, needs more edge and bite to it...sub could use a little boosting too....some nice bass work throuhout, middle section is lush, mixdown is pretty good overall...nice and clear, apart from the amen....structure and arrangment like i said is kinda basic, not really much to it....potential in this but defo needs a more complex strcuture, more atmos, sfx and automation on drums and bass to add movement and modulation...not bad tho.
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01-09-2008 19:39 |
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sam beckett
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Registration Date: 03-09-2008
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nice traditional build up nice and steady. good melodys in there. like the thunderous sounds just before the drop. really starts to pick up around the 2:00 mark, with some nice variation and reverse drums in there(i think), the base might be on the loud side muddying the mix maybe sort that out wiv some eq'ing.
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03-09-2008 17:48 |
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warlok
Somthing Inspireing Should Go Here.
Registration Date: 12-09-2008
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EZ BZ! Big sound at the begining pulled me straght in. i love the trancy sound that follows and thumbs up on the kick and snare! love the amen and the fx. breakdown sounds good. one idea that might sound good as it drops is if you took the first 2 bars of your break out and solo the bass synth drown out the low end and bring the break in on your lowest bass note 3rd note in with a nice crunchy cymbal. you could also filter the amen in the same gap as the bass so it sort of slides into the main break. i love the switch at around 3:50 very punchy! like it !
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