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2clix 
Doctor Obvious
Registration Date: 17-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Edens Artistry' and post your comments here!
Havent uploaded in a sec so I figured I'd throw this out there, 2 nights work, inspired by Donny tracks...fl7 and samples, unfinished, still have alot to do to it! anyways enjoi
I'll get on reviews after work scouts honor
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28-08-2008 18:43 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Intro sounds phased badly.
Main part is slightly better, but the problem is still there, this cancels a part of the sound.
When the drums kick in the track reminds me of Disco Dodo. The basses have no impact at all, due to sound canceling (phasing) and probably lack of a sub/low end. Needs better EQing.
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28-08-2008 21:35 |
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Krisch
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Registration Date: 19-02-2008
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There are wicked ideas! I like this one but i have to agrre with BD it sounds bad. But its normal if you have 2 night work in the track imo. Tbh i dont know whats the problem, i think something with the kick it has too much stereo field. You should to work on EQ-ing. The bass is too low but it makes the kick too weak.
Anyway i like it. Usually i get similar sounding tunes after 2 night.
I want to hear a developed version
Good work keep it up!
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28-08-2008 23:19 |
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stickbubbly
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Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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havent uploaded in a sec? thats a long time dude. lol
nice beat in the intro.
vocals sound nice and deep but are muffled. cant really hear what it sais.
nice drop. interesting rhythm.
solid for 2 nights work. keep it up bro!
ezzzzz
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29-08-2008 01:11 |
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Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Yeah, some cool original ideas here but the mix is a bit muddy. Not bad for two nights of work tho. Love that dubsteppy start - you could have made a whole tune out of that.
Some of the background FX and vocals are too dominant and too reverby I reckon. Also, there's too many competing sounds when it drops. Gets a bit crowded in there. Bassline isn't bad but needs to be tighter.
Vocals work pretty well. But I'd deffo EQ the lows out of them cos they are too bassy. Perhaps try adding some highpass on them (or something similar)?
More melody would be good too, it's a little stark and head-fuckish right now. 
Or maybe that is the sound you're after?
Keep working on it... dib dib, dob dob.
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29-08-2008 19:36 |
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Sephiroth
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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first of all like the title a lot...nice choice of words that....intro vocal is lush....the sfx, atmos etc behind it are a bit wierd...dont really sound right...
this tune as got some awesome ideas....the half-step drums and bass sounds are nice but not really jumping out the speakers enough...
drum lacks impact imo....sub isnt consistent enough..sounds like its jumping in and out the speakers on the system im listenin on....
kick doesn't stand out enough either.....overall mix is a little cluttered....defo work on this track...its got some really good ideas and sustanins interest throughout but the mixdown is pretty bad imo...clean things up, find everything a place in the mix and this could really be a phat tune i reckon.
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