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straight up beastin'
Registration Date: 10-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Pinball Rolla' and post your comments here!
what up. we've got gold! n' est-ce pas? yeah we know we rock!! next time we'll send our government, they'll fail for sure, anyways since we're talking about champions.. phil zwijse european champion skateboarding on a street course! big up! enough about sport, this tune right here was made on my last summer vacation since I'm off working, and it's got all sort influences.. made one fruity 6 and partially on fruity 7, sum samples from the .be family, which i greatly thank you for, because all my other samples suck donkeytballs.. hope you like it.
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27-08-2008 02:40 |
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2clix
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Big ups on the gold! first review in a long time, lucky you...
I like the intro all gritty and grime style right up my alley, glitch in your hats @ :37 dunno if that was intentional
bass is drowning your drums specially 1:06 and on
layer your drums more and turn down that bass, its clipping in parts.
track doesnt really flow, all the sounds are kinda doing there own thing and not really coming together specially the bass. Im a sucker for the half time shizzle liking that.
Work on your arrangement, maybe try to mimick the timing of a pro track. Theres alot going on in this track...too much for the ears try to be as minimal as possible and work on your levels because the volumes fluctuate way to much...
im liking the sounds overall just a bit all over the place atm
peace
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27-08-2008 05:13 |
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rivalfaction
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gold eh?seems like it. really like the moody atmospheric intro though the stuttered beat doesnt quite do it for me.
that is a killer bass though its clipping on my system.
feel the beats could be a bit more powerful to enhance the dirtiness of the main line, but thats just personal choice.
some nice breaks in there which give it an almost half time feel
the kick rolls detract a little from the overall theme. i feel like i may have been too critical but if these things are addressed then , personally, your gonna have a really solid track there. Good skillz
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27-08-2008 17:18 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Chords and atmosphere sound like a rocktune instead of DnB. A bit of a weird choice of sounds here and there.
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28-08-2008 00:26 |
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thanx for the reviews guys, i'll try to clean that bass up, maybe overdid it a little distrting the bass n stuff, but it's hard to hear details like that when your levelin g on logitec speakers that came free with the computer lol.. anyways, i'll try to follow the pointers u guys give..cheers..
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