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technetiumzk 
Super-Duper Rad Funky
Registration Date: 21-04-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Microscopic' and post your comments here!
A little roller i put together. my first real dnb piece for a month and a half, a bit experimental. The letters spell out D-J-N-O-S-E-B-L-E-E-D as in Nosebleed, my alias. I thought it helped the track roll so i kept it in. Cheers .be!
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im 14, deal with it.
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26-08-2008 05:21 |
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cynik
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Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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reckon you should work on that bass more to integrate it better into the tune. for now its loud and dull but I can hear what youre up to in here and I like it
snare is very squashed, easen on the compression. feels like a ten tone weight is on top of it
not a bad intro - just an intro nevertheless. work it into a tune and repost for more feedback IMO
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26-08-2008 07:29 |
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[dj] Leonces
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Registration Date: 13-04-2008
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definitely got a cool vibe. I gets a little hard to follow towards the end when I have my headphones on. Its got an oldschool hip hop kinda feel to it, or maybe something like the Avalanches?
Again the snare sounds good when I have it on the computer speakers but its noticeably squashed when I have my headphones on. --> less compression or layer another snare on top.
I like everything but the bass. It sounds cool on its own, but its not enough and/or its not the right bass for the song. Its almost like a sub bass. Put some detuned saws in there?
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27-08-2008 01:36 |
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lead:end
straight up beastin'
Registration Date: 10-08-2006
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i can't figure out why this tune hasn't been rated alot before.. i kinda dig it, i have a lot of hashiez in my system but it's well produced.. gets a bit repetitive but i like the little shit in the transitions.. bled that in with a little variation in bassline and you seal the deal..and damn really fast,hehe. keep it up.
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27-08-2008 02:06 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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OK track, maybe a bit to reverb-wet here and there. but the overall sounds is crisp and clean. The main vocal is a bit boring, do something with it. Tune would work better when you would add a part with some screaming lead melody.
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28-08-2008 09:44 |
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BESHAI
Beshai
Registration Date: 17-05-2008
Posts: 100
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28-08-2008 14:01 |
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